Part 1
Examiner
Do you like reading?
Candidate
Yes, since I was a child I keep reading a book per week.
Examiner
Do you prefer to read on paper or on a screen?
Candidate
I prefer read the printed book. I'm not used to read on a phone or a iPad. It makes me feel strange.
Examiner
When do you need to read carefully, and when not?
Candidate
Some books about my major needs me to read more carefully and take notes. For others I won't be so serious. I just take them as a kind of relax.
Examiner
Do you prefer scanning or detailed reading?
Candidate
I prefer scanning than detailed reading to be honest. Books for me just like the TikTok videos for others. I won't take them as something important that need me to analyze.
Do you like reading?
Score: 68.0Suggestion: 句子表达意思清楚,但语法和用词有错误,且回答较简短。建议:1) 使用正确的时态和习惯表达(例如 present perfect 或 present simple)。2) 加入一到两句支持细节(为什么喜欢、最喜欢的书类或最近读过的书),保持不超过5句。3) 使用连接词使句子更自然(e.g. because, so, and)。
Example: Yes, I do. Ever since I was a child I've read about a book a week because I enjoy learning new ideas and getting lost in stories. For example, recently I finished a historical novel that taught me a lot about another culture.
Do you prefer to read on paper or on a screen?
Score: 72.0Suggestion: 回答直接但有语法和用词小错误,且可加入具体原因或对比以丰富内容。建议:1) 注意动词形式和冠词(e.g. prefer reading printed books, I'm not used to reading on a phone or an iPad)。2) 提供具体原因并用连接词(because, so)连接观点。3) 控制在3–5句内,避免重复。
Example: I prefer reading printed books because I find the paper easier on my eyes and more comfortable to hold. I'm not used to reading on a phone or an iPad, so screens often make me feel tired and distracted.
When do you need to read carefully, and when not?
Score: 70.0Suggestion: 回答结构合理但有语法错误与拼写问题,细节可以更具体。建议:1) 主句注意主谓一致(e.g. books about my major need)。2) 说明何种笔记或举例(what you note, how you study),并用连接词(for example, while)。3) 用更恰当的词汇(relax → relaxation / for relaxation)。
Example: I need to read carefully when the material is related to my major because I have to take detailed notes and remember key concepts for exams. For other books, I read more casually for relaxation, enjoying the story without taking notes.
Do you prefer scanning or detailed reading?
Score: 64.0Suggestion: 回答有比较有创意的类比,但语法和搭配错误影响流畅性,观点也可更平衡。建议:1) 使用正确搭配(prefer scanning to detailed reading)。2) 解释原因并给一两个例子,使用连接词(because, however)。3) 避免绝对化表述,展示能在不同情境调整阅读方式的灵活性。
Example: I prefer scanning to detailed reading because I often just want to get the main ideas quickly. However, if a text is important for my studies, I will switch to detailed reading and analyze it carefully, taking notes when necessary.
× Yes, since I was a child I keep reading a book per week.
✓ Yes, since I was a child I have kept reading a book per week.
问题类型:现在完成进行/现在完成时使用错误。句子表达从过去持续到现在的动作,应使用现在完成时(或现在完成进行时)。建议使用“have kept”或“have been reading”,如“I have kept reading a book per week”或“I have been reading a book every week since I was a child”。注意“per week”更自然用“every week”。
× I prefer read the printed book.
✓ I prefer to read printed books.
问题类型:动词不定式/动词形式使用错误(偏好动词prefer后应接不定式或名词)。在表示偏好时,prefer后面通常跟不定式(to read)或动名词,但更常见为“prefer to read”。另外“printed book”应为复数“printed books”来表示一般偏好。建议改为“I prefer to read printed books.”
× I'm not used to read on a phone or a iPad.
✓ I'm not used to reading on a phone or an iPad.
问题类型:介词/固定搭配与动词形式错误。短语“used to”后接动词时,有两种结构:表示过去习惯的“used to do”,或表示习惯性的“be used to”后接动名词。这里应是后者,因此用“used to reading”。此外“a iPad”应为“an iPad”。建议改为“I'm not used to reading on a phone or an iPad.”
× It makes me feel strange.
✓ They make me feel strange.
问题类型:代词使用错误。前文指代“a phone or an iPad”(复数/两个可并列的设备),因此应使用复数代词“they”而不是“It”。若指单一设备,可改为“It makes me feel strange when I read on it.” 建议根据上下文使用“They make me feel strange.”或更具体地改写。
× Some books about my major needs me to read more carefully and take notes.
✓ Some books about my major need me to read more carefully and take notes.
问题类型:主谓一致错误。主语“Some books”是复数,谓语动词应使用原形“need”而不是“needs”。因此改为“need”。
× For others I won't be so serious.
✓ For others I won't be so serious.
问题类型:代词指代问题(语义层面)。句子语法本身可接受,但“others”指代不够明确,更自然为“For other books I won't be so serious.” 建议在“others”前加上名词以明确指代:"For other books, I won't be so serious."(此处为改进建议,原句语法无重大错误。)
× I just take them as a kind of relax.
✓ I just take them as a kind of relaxation.
问题类型:形容词/副词使用错误。名词“relax”用法错误,应使用名词“relaxation”。因此改为“a kind of relaxation”或更自然地“I just take them as a way to relax.” 建议使用“I just take them as a kind of relaxation.”
× I prefer scanning than detailed reading to be honest.
✓ I prefer scanning to detailed reading, to be honest.
问题类型:连词使用错误。表示比较时“prefer A to B”是固定结构,不用“prefer A than B”。此外“to be honest”放在句末更自然。建议改为“I prefer scanning to detailed reading, to be honest.”
× Books for me just like the TikTok videos for others.
✓ Books are like TikTok videos for others to me.
问题类型:句子结构/比喻结构错误。原句语序和比较对象不清晰。更清晰的表达是“Books are like TikTok videos to others (for me)”或“Books for me are like TikTok videos for other people.” 建议改为“Books are like TikTok videos for other people, as for me.” 更自然的句子可写为“For me, books are like TikTok videos for other people.”
× I won't take them as something important that need me to analyze.
✓ I won't take them as something important that needs me to analyze.
问题类型:代词/主谓一致混合错误。关系从句中“something important”是单数,关系代词从句动词应为“needs”。另外“need me to analyze”结构有些别扭,可改为“that needs me to analyze”或更自然地“that requires analysis from me.” 建议改为“I won't take them as something important that needs me to analyze.”