Reading— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more natural and concise. Start with a direct topic sentence, avoid repetition and grammar mistakes, and add a brief reason and a recent change as a supporting detail using a linking word. Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Example: Not really — I prefer watching short videos on YouTube because they are more entertaining and quicker to follow. However, recently I've tried to read more, since reading helps me concentrate and learn deeper information.

Suggestion: Give a clear topic sentence and tidy up grammar. Use linking words to add reasons (e.g., because, so) and provide specific examples of convenience. Avoid fragmented sentences.

Example: I prefer reading on a screen because it is more convenient. For example, my phone and iPad let me look up unfamiliar words instantly and carry many articles with me, so I can read anytime.

Suggestion: Organize into a clear topic sentence and two contrasting supporting details using linking words (for example, when vs. when not). Correct vocabulary (e.g., 'contracts', 'official documents', 'for pleasure', 'skim'). Provide specific examples of documents and explain consequences of not reading carefully.

Example: I need to read carefully when dealing with work documents, such as contracts or official forms, because mistakes can have serious consequences. On the other hand, when I'm reading for pleasure I usually skim through articles or books to get the main idea quickly.

Suggestion: Begin with a concise topic sentence stating preference, then use linking words to explain exceptions and give a specific example. Improve grammar (e.g., 'faster', 'for example, at work'). Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Example: I prefer scanning because it's faster and helps me find key information quickly. However, I read in detail when the material matters, for example at work when I review reports or contracts.

× No, I don't like reading, instead I watch some videos and short clip on YouTube.

✓ No, I don't like reading; instead I watch some videos and short clips on YouTube.

The phrase 'short clip' should be plural to match 'some videos' and indicate multiple items. Also use a semicolon or conjunction to correctly connect two independent clauses. Suggestion: use consistent plurality and proper punctuation.

× It's more much more fun to me.

✓ It's much more fun for me.

The phrase 'more much more' is redundant and incorrect. Use 'much more' for emphasis and the preposition 'for' with 'fun' to indicate who finds it fun. Suggestion: remove duplication and use 'for' rather than 'to' in this context.

× But these days I try to read something.

✓ But these days I try to read something.

This sentence is grammatically acceptable. It correctly uses the present simple to express a habitual action. No change needed.

× I differently prefer. Read on screens because it is really comfortable if I find some words or text and it it also convenient because it usually it is on my phone or iPad so I can. Easily read them.

✓ I definitely prefer reading on screens because it is really convenient when I want to look up a word or a text, and it is usually on my phone or iPad so I can easily read them.

Multiple issues: 'differently' is the wrong adverb; 'definitely' expresses preference. Sentence fragments should be combined into one coherent sentence. Use 'reading on screens' rather than 'Read on screens'. Fix repeated 'it'. Use 'when I want to look up' or 'if I need to find' instead of 'if I find'. 'Easily' should be placed before the verb 'read'. Suggestion: combine fragments, choose correct adverbs and place adverbs close to verbs.

× When do you need to read carefully, and when not?

✓ When do you need to read carefully, and when do you not?

The second clause is missing the auxiliary 'do' for the question form. While article usage was flagged, the real issue is question structure: include 'do' to form the negative question. Suggestion: mirror the auxiliary in the contrasting clause.

× I usually read carefully when I work or have to read carefully such as. Contract paper or official paper and if. I read for happy I read just skinny.

✓ I usually read carefully when I work or when I have to read official documents such as contracts. If I read for pleasure, I just skim them.

Original contains fragments, incorrect word choices and awkward phrases: 'such as.' was separated incorrectly, 'Contract paper' should be 'contracts' or 'contract papers', 'official paper' becomes 'official documents', 'read for happy' should be 'read for pleasure', and 'skinny' is the wrong word; 'skim' means to read quickly. Suggestion: combine fragments into full sentences, use correct nouns ('contracts'), and choose appropriate verbs ('skim').

× I prefer scanning, it is much easier to read them and also fast.

✓ I prefer scanning; it is much easier and faster to read that way.

Comma splice: two independent clauses joined incorrectly with a comma. Also 'fast' should be 'faster' as a comparative and 'to read them' is vague; 'that way' clarifies the method. Suggestion: use a semicolon or split into two sentences and use comparative adjective 'faster'.

× But I need to read carefully. For example work I read carefully.

✓ But I need to read carefully; for example, at work I read carefully.

Sentence fragments and missing preposition: 'For example work' should be 'for example, at work'. Use a semicolon or conjunction to connect related ideas. Tense is fine (present simple for habitual action). Suggestion: add 'at' and punctuation to make a complete sentence.