Reading— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be concise, correct grammar, and use a clear topic sentence followed by one or two specific details. Avoid redundancy and unnatural phrasing (e.g., "to reading", "gives the better feeling"). Use linking words sparingly if needed.

Example: Yes, I enjoy reading. In my free time I usually read novels and occasionally comics because they help me relax and spark my imagination.

Suggestion: Start with a clear preference statement, correct vocabulary and grammar, and give one or two concrete reasons. Avoid unclear or repeated phrases (e.g., "on papers", "on the other side screen", "Wedding"). Use linking words like "because" or "so" to connect reason and opinion.

Example: I prefer reading on paper because it feels more natural and reduces eye strain. For example, long passages on screens often make my eyes tired, so I choose paper for novels.

Suggestion: Answer directly with a topic sentence showing both situations, then give specific examples and a linking phrase. Fix grammatical errors and be more precise about what counts as "important" vs "not careful" reading.

Example: I read carefully when the material is important, such as study notes, instructions, or work documents, because I need to understand details. In contrast, I skim lighter materials like comics and short news articles for general enjoyment.

Suggestion: Give a clear preference and explain why using correct tense and coherent linking. Avoid broken sentences and vague phrases like "where that my interest can generate". Provide one concrete example of when you would use detailed reading.

Example: I usually prefer scanning because it lets me get a quick overview of the text. However, I do detailed reading when a topic interests me or when I need to remember facts, for example when studying for an exam.

× Indeed, I love to reading and it gives the better feeling and in my free time I mostly do reading of novels and some comics.

✓ Indeed, I love reading; it gives me a better feeling, and in my free time I mostly read novels and some comics.

The verb 'love' should be followed by the base verb with -ing (gerund) so 'love reading' is correct. 'Love to reading' is incorrect. 'It gives the better feeling' needs an article removed and an object: 'gives me a better feeling'. 'Do reading of' is awkward; use the simple verb 'read'. Use parallel verb forms and proper pronoun object. Suggestions: use 'love reading', 'gives me a better feeling', and 'I mostly read novels and comics.'

× Well, I mostly prefer to read on papers as papers give the real experience on the other side screen.

✓ Well, I mostly prefer to read on paper, as paper gives a more real experience than a screen.

Use the uncountable noun 'paper' or the singular 'a paper' depending on meaning; 'papers' is incorrect here. 'On papers' should be 'on paper'. 'Give the real experience' needs article and comparative: 'gives a more real experience'. 'On the other side screen' is incorrect word order and missing article: use 'than a screen'. Suggestion: 'read on paper' and 'more real experience than a screen.'

× It's not good for the eye screen.

✓ Screens are not good for the eyes.

The phrase 'eye screen' is incorrect; use plural 'eyes' and 'screen' should be plural or general 'screens'. Also 'It's not good for' is awkward—use 'Screens are not good for the eyes.' Suggestion: refer to 'the eyes' and use plural 'screens' or 'a screen' depending on context.

× Wedding is not good for the eyes and that's why.

✓ Watching screens is not good for the eyes, and that's why I prefer paper.

'Wedding' is a mistaken word; likely intended 'watching' or 'the screen'. The sentence is incomplete and lacks clear subject and meaning. Provide a complete clause explaining the reason: 'Watching screens is not good for the eyes, and that's why I prefer paper.' Suggestion: replace wrong word, complete the reason, and link to previous sentence.

× When we need when we read some important study material or anything important that are benefit for us that is read carefully and when we read some any comics or any other.

✓ When we read important study material or anything that benefits us, we read carefully; when we read comics or similar light material, we do not read as carefully.

The original sentence has repetition ('when we need when we read'), incorrect relative clauses, incorrect verb 'are benefit' and unclear structure. Use a clear conditional/time clause and correct verb: 'anything that benefits us'. Use contrast between careful reading and light reading. Suggestion: simplify to two clear clauses and correct verb forms.

× I mostly preferred scanning when I was reading and it gives the overview of the reading in the fast way.

✓ I mostly prefer scanning when I read because it gives an overview of the text quickly.

The student mixed past and present: the question asks about preference generally, so use present simple 'prefer' and 'read'. 'Preferred' and 'was reading' imply past. 'It gives the overview' should be 'it gives an overview' and 'in the fast way' should be 'quickly' or 'in a fast way'. Suggestion: use consistent present tense for habitual preference and replace awkward phrases with 'an overview' and 'quickly.'

× On the other side I will.

✓ On the other hand, I sometimes do detailed reading as well.

'On the other side I will.' is incomplete and unclear. Use the common linking phrase 'on the other hand' and complete the thought: 'I sometimes do detailed reading as well.' Suggestion: provide a full clause explaining frequency and context.

× I'm also sometimes do detailed reading of where that my interest can generate when.

✓ I also sometimes do detailed reading when something interests me.

The original has incorrect word order ('I'm also sometimes do') and awkward relative clause ('of where that my interest can generate when'). Use correct auxiliary and adverb order: 'I sometimes do' or 'I also sometimes read in detail'. Express condition simply: 'when something interests me.' Suggestion: use 'I sometimes read in detail when I am interested.'