Reading— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: ปรับประโยคให้เป็นธรรมชาติและถูกไวยากรณ์ โดยเริ่มด้วยประโยคตอบตรง ๆ แล้วตามด้วยเหตุผลสั้น ๆ ใช้คำนามและคำกริยาที่ถูกต้อง ลดคำซ้ำ และจำกัดความยาวไม่เกิน 5 ประโยค ตัวอย่างสิ่งที่ควรปรับ: ‘lie’ ควรเป็น ‘like’, ‘activities’ ให้เป็นเอกพจน์เมื่อใช้กับ ‘favorite’, และใช้วลีที่ถูกต้องเช่น ‘in my free time’

Example: Yes, I like reading. It is my favorite activity because I enjoy learning new things and relaxing. I often read in my free time, and I also read for work to find useful information.

Suggestion: ปรับโครงสร้างประโยคให้กระชับและเป็นธรรมชาติมากขึ้น ระบุเหตุผลชัดเจน ใช้ linking words เช่น ‘because’ ตามด้วยข้อดีเฉพาะ และแก้ข้อผิดพลาดเรื่องไวยากรณ์ (เช่น ‘is a comfortable’ → ‘it’s more comfortable’) อย่าใส่ข้อมูลซ้ำ

Example: It depends on the situation, but I prefer reading on a screen because it’s more convenient for work and makes it easy to share and search for information.

Suggestion: ชัดเจนขึ้น แบ่งเป็นประโยคตอบตรง ๆ แล้วให้เหตุผลเฉพาะ ใช้คำถูกต้อง (e.g., ‘information’ เป็นเอกพจน์ไม่เติม ‘s’) และหลีกเลี่ยงคำที่ไม่จำเป็นหรือเสียงบังเอิญ (‘uh’) ให้ตัวอย่างสถานการณ์ที่ต้องอ่านละเอียดและตัวอย่างที่ไม่ต้องอ่านละเอียด

Example: I need to read carefully when I handle work documents that relate to national security because small details can be important. For informal things like newsletters or social posts, I usually scan them quickly.

Suggestion: ตอบชัดเจนด้วยโครงสร้าง ‘topic sentence + brief supporting details’ อธิบายขั้นตอนแบบมีลำดับโดยใช้ linking words เช่น ‘first’ และ ‘then’ แก้ศัพท์และไวยากรณ์ (เช่น ‘scan’ แทน ‘scanning of reading’, ลบคำซ้ำ และหลีกเลี่ยงเสียงรบกวนเช่น ‘uh’)

Example: I usually scan a text first to get the main ideas, and then I read more carefully if I need to understand details. Finally, I often reread important parts to remember them.

× Yes, I lie and I admit reading is my favorite activities that I love to do in I have a free time sometime.

✓ Yes, I like and I admit reading is my favorite activity that I love to do when I have free time.

The student used 'lie' instead of 'like' (word choice/verb form). 'Activities' should be singular 'activity' to agree with 'is' (singular). 'in I have a free time sometime' is incorrect order and articles; correct phrase is 'when I have free time.' Suggestion: use 'like' for preference, match singular/plural (activity vs activities), and use a time clause 'when I have free time.'

× Reading is just like a one of my function for working and for searching some informations.

✓ Reading is just like one of my functions for work and for searching some information.

Use 'one of' without 'a' before it. 'Function' should be plural 'functions' to match 'one of my'. 'for working' is better as 'for work' and 'informations' is uncountable; use 'information.' Suggestion: remove unnecessary articles, pluralize correctly, and use uncountable nouns properly.

× It depends on the situations, but now I think I prefer to read on a screen because of is a comfortable for working and is easily for reading and sharing for others.

✓ It depends on the situation, but now I think I prefer to read on a screen because it is comfortable for working and easy for reading and sharing with others.

Use singular 'situation' for general statements. Omit 'because of' and use 'because it is' to introduce a reason. 'is a comfortable' should be 'it is comfortable' and 'is easily' should be 'easy.' Use 'sharing with others' (correct preposition). Suggestion: use 'because it is' structure and correct adjective forms (comfortable, easy) and prepositions ('with').

× To be honest, in my work is is ensured essential that I read carefully because of some informations or details is, uh, connect with the national security issue.

✓ To be honest, in my work it is essential that I read carefully because some information or details are connected with national security issues.

Remove duplicate 'is is.' Use 'it is essential that I read' fixed clause. 'informations' should be 'information' (uncountable). Use plural 'details are connected' for agreement. 'connect with' -> 'connected with' (past participle in passive). 'national security issue' -> plural 'issues' is more natural. Suggestion: use correct cleft structure 'it is essential that', use uncountable nouns, and match verb forms and agreement.

× But sometimes it's not because of, it's just like a.

✓ But sometimes it is not necessary because the material is not important.

Original is a fragment and unclear. 'Because of' needs an object; 'it's just like a' is incomplete. Provide a full clause: 'it is not necessary because the material is not important.' Suggestion: avoid sentence fragments by completing the idea and providing a subject and verb.

× I admit that reading is my skill, so I usually prefer scanning of reading at first time and then I will read the detail and just uh, reread to understand my my knowledge. Adding.

✓ I admit that reading is my skill, so I usually prefer to scan at first and then I read the details and reread to improve my understanding.

Use the base verb 'scan' after 'prefer' (not 'scanning of reading'). 'at first time' -> 'at first' or 'initially.' 'read the detail' -> 'read the details.' 'reread to understand my my knowledge' -> 'reread to improve my understanding.' Remove stray 'Adding.' Suggestion: use correct verb forms after 'prefer', correct time expressions, pluralize 'details', and use natural phrase 'improve my understanding.'