Reading— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 문장 구조와 문법을 자연스럽게 고치고, 주제를 명확히 하는 한 문장(주제문)을 먼저 말한 뒤 1~2개의 구체적인 이유를 연결 어구로 자연스럽게 덧붙이세요. 예: 시제를 고치하고 관사/전치사 오류를 바로잡으세요. 또한 'before going to bed'처럼 동명사 형태를 사용하고, 이유를 연결할 때 'because'이나 'so' 대신 'which helps me...' 같은 연결 표현을 사용하면 더 자연스럽습니다.

Example: Yes, I enjoy reading. I usually read a book before going to bed, which helps me relax and sleep better.

Suggestion: 비교 표현과 형용사 사용을 정확히 하고 불필요한 말(uh, I don't know why)을 줄이세요. 'more better'는 오류이므로 'better'만 사용하고, 'smell of paper'처럼 단수형 표현이 자연스럽습니다. 주제문을 명확히 한 뒤 2개의 구체적 이유(눈 건강, 촉감/향기)를 논리적으로 연결하세요.

Example: I prefer reading on paper because it is better for my eyes and I enjoy the smell and texture of paper, which makes reading feel cozier.

Suggestion: 문장을 간결하고 명확하게 구성하세요. 질문에는 두 가지 상황을 분명히 제시해야 합니다: 언제 꼼꼼히 읽는지와 언제 그렇지 않은지. 'school works' 대신 'schoolwork' 또는 'academic texts'를 사용하고, 맥락을 설명하는 연결어(when, whereas, but)로 이유를 덧붙이세요.

Example: It depends on the situation: I read carefully when it is for schoolwork or studying because I need to understand details, but I skim casual articles or light fiction when I just want to relax.

Suggestion: 의견을 분명히 표현하되 근거를 더 구체적으로 제시하세요. 'absolutely'는 구어체이지만 허용되나, 연결어(when, because, for example)를 사용해 이유와 예시를 명확히 하세요. 또한 'what they want to say'보다 'the main points' 같은 표현이 더 적절합니다.

Example: I prefer scanning, especially for articles and emails, because it helps me quickly grasp the main points and decide which parts need more attention.

× I usually read a book before go to bed.

✓ I usually read a book before going to bed.

This sentence requires the gerund form after the preposition 'before'. Use 'going' instead of the base verb 'go' to show the action that happens prior to another action. Suggestion: after prepositions like before/after, use verb+-ing (e.g., 'before going').

× It makes me feel more relaxed and I can sleep well.

✓ It makes me feel more relaxed and I can sleep well.

No grammatical correction needed for comparative 'more relaxed' and adverb 'well'. Keep as is. (Included only because sentence was reviewed against list.)

× I prefer to read on paper because it is more better for my eyes and I love the smells of papers.

✓ I prefer to read on paper because it is better for my eyes and I love the smell of paper.

'More better' is incorrect because 'better' is already the comparative form; do not use 'more' before 'better'. Use 'better' alone. Also 'the smells of papers' is awkward: 'smell' as a noun is uncountable when referring to general scent, and 'paper' as a material/unprint medium is uncountable here, so use 'the smell of paper' or 'the smell of books'. Suggestion: use correct comparative and uncountable noun forms.

× Uh, it feels very cozy and comfortable.

✓ It feels very cozy and comfortable.

Remove the filler 'Uh,' in formal speech; otherwise sentence is grammatically correct. The issue is stylistic/structure rather than grammar.

× I don't know why but I always like.

✓ I don't know why, but I always like it.

The original ends with 'like' but lacks an object, so the verb is incomplete. Add the pronoun 'it' to show what is liked (referring to reading or paper). Also add a comma before 'but' for clarity.

× It depends on situation like when I need to read for school works then I need to read carefully but umm like reading.

✓ It depends on the situation. For example, when I need to read for schoolwork, I need to read carefully, but for other reading I do not.

Multiple issues: missing article 'the' before 'situation'; 'school works' is incorrect—use the uncountable 'schoolwork' or 'school assignments'; run-on and unclear ending 'like reading' should be clarified. Also add commas and divide into two sentences for clarity.

× I prefer scanning absolutely.

✓ I absolutely prefer scanning.

Placing adverb 'absolutely' before the main verb 'prefer' is more natural in English. The original is understandable but the word order is awkward. Suggestion: place adverbs of degree before the verb or before the adjective they modify.

× Umm when I read an article and emails, scanning is more helpful for me to understand what they want to say.

✓ When I read an article or emails, scanning helps me understand what they want to say.

Use parallel structure 'an article or emails' (or better 'articles or emails'). 'Scanning is more helpful for me to understand' is wordy; use 'scanning helps me understand'. Also ensure plural consistency: 'articles or emails' or 'an article or an email'.