Reading— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more natural and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words (uh), correct collocations (say "I really enjoy" not "I so enjoy"), and give one or two specific supporting details with linking words. Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Example: I really enjoy reading because it helps me relax in my free time. I usually read detective novels and books about space, as I enjoy both suspense and scientific ideas. Reading these genres broadens my horizons and gives me new perspectives.

Suggestion: Improve accuracy and fluency: use correct verb forms and collocations ("at present" → okay, "honest paper" is incorrect — say "real books" or "paper books"). Avoid repetition and tighten structure: state preference, give two brief reasons, then a short past contrast using a linking word (e.g., "however").

Example: At present I prefer reading on a screen because it is convenient and saves time. However, when I was younger I preferred paper books because I liked the feel of the pages. Now I often read on my phone or tablet when I am commuting.

Suggestion: Clarify your ideas and correct opposites: the answer is confusing (says difficult books do not need careful reading). First give a clear topic sentence that directly answers the question, then explain with examples. Use correct terms ("skim" not "skimming it" as a standalone) and linking words (e.g., "whereas", "for example"). Keep sentences complete and avoid trailing fragments.

Example: I need to read carefully when the material is technical or complex, for example math textbooks or scientific articles, because details matter. In contrast, when I read light fiction or short blog posts I usually skim to get the main idea quickly, which saves time.

Suggestion: Make the contrast clear and grammatically correct: begin with a direct statement of preference depending on purpose, then give two concise reasons using linking words ("because", "however"). Use correct noun/verb agreement and verb forms ("difficult books", "requires", "skim"). Avoid repeating the same idea twice.

Example: It depends on my purpose: I choose detailed reading for technical or difficult books because I need to understand concepts precisely. However, I scan or skim light stories for enjoyment to save time and get the overall idea quickly.

× I so enjoy reading and I usually read when I have free time because it helps me unwind.

✓ I really enjoy reading, and I usually read when I have free time because it helps me unwind.

'So' before a verb is informal and often ungrammatical in this context; 'really' or 'very much' is the correct adverb to modify 'enjoy'. Also add a comma before 'and' to join two independent clauses. Suggestion: use adverbs like 'really' or 'very much' to modify verbs, and punctuate compound sentences with a comma before the coordinating conjunction.

× Uh, I like some specific topics like detective or uh, space or some mystery books.

✓ I like specific topics such as detective fiction, space, and mystery books.

Use 'such as' for examples and parallel noun forms. 'Detective' should be 'detective fiction' or 'detective novels'. Use commas and 'and' to join list items. Suggestion: keep list items parallel (all nouns or noun phrases) and use 'such as' for examples.

× I like to read it because I want to broaden my horizon.

✓ I like to read them because I want to broaden my horizons.

Pronoun 'it' does not agree with plural 'books'; use 'them'. 'Horizon' in this idiom is normally plural 'horizons'. Suggestion: ensure pronoun number matches its referent and use established idiomatic forms (broaden my horizons).

× At the present, I would like to read on a screen because it's convenient and also help me save time.

✓ At present, I prefer to read on a screen because it's convenient and also helps me save time.

'At the present' is awkward; say 'At present' or 'Currently'. 'Would like' expresses desire but answer asks preference—use present simple 'prefer'. Subject-verb agreement: 'helps' for 'it'. Suggestion: use 'prefer' for habitual preferences and match verb forms to subject.

× When I was young, I preferred to read honest paper because I liked the feeling that I touched the paper.

✓ When I was young, I preferred to read real paper because I liked the feeling of touching the paper.

'Honest paper' is incorrect collocation; 'real paper' or 'paper books' is appropriate. Use 'the feeling of touching' rather than 'that I touched'. Suggestion: choose correct collocations (real paper/paper books) and use 'the feeling of' + gerund for sensations.

× But up until now, I don't have enough time to bring a book, so I prefer a screen.

✓ But up until now, I haven't had enough time to bring a book, so I prefer a screen.

Context 'up until now' refers to past-to-present experience—present perfect 'haven't had' is appropriate. Also 'bring a book' is fine but 'carry a book' or 'take a book with me' may sound more natural. Suggestion: use present perfect for actions/state continuing to present.

× Uh, in my views, reading some difficult books like math books is unnecessary for reading carefully.

✓ In my view, reading some difficult books, like math books, requires careful reading.

Original sentence is contradictory and awkward: 'unnecessary for reading carefully' conflicts with intent. Likely meaning is that difficult books need careful reading. Use singular 'view' and restructure: 'requires careful reading.' Suggestion: use 'in my view' and structure sentences so subject and verb clearly express intended meaning.

× But when you read some story like funny story you can skimming it.

✓ But when you read a story, like a funny story, you can skim it.

After modal or auxiliary verbs use base form 'skim', not '-ing'. Also use articles and commas: 'a story' and 'like a funny story'. Suggestion: use base verb after auxiliary/modal and ensure correct article use.

× I think it's help you save time and also you can.

✓ I think it helps you save time, and it is convenient.

'It's help' is ungrammatical—needs third person singular 'helps'. The phrase 'and also you can' is incomplete; replace with a complete clause such as 'and it is convenient' or 'and you can relax more.' Suggestion: ensure verbs agree with their subjects and complete any coordinated clauses.

× Oh it depends on the book's topic because when I read a technical or a difficult books it requires me to read carefully like read in the detail but when I just relax with some funny stories I can skimming it and also it help me save time.

✓ Oh, it depends on the book's topic, because when I read a technical or difficult book, it requires me to read carefully and pay attention to details, but when I just relax with funny stories I can skim them, and they help me save time.

Multiple issues: article and number ('a difficult books' -> 'difficult book'); subject-verb agreement ('it requires'); awkward phrasing 'read in the detail' -> 'pay attention to details'; verb form 'skimming' should be 'skim'; 'it help' -> 'they help' to agree with 'stories'. Also add commas for clarity. Suggestion: keep noun phrases consistent in number and articles, use base verb forms after modal/auxiliary, ensure subject-verb agreement, and break long sentences into clear clauses.