Reading— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 发音和句子流畅性需要改进，避免词汇拼写/发音错误并保持句子简洁。回答要有明确主题句 + 1-2 个具体支持细节，控制在不超过5句。注意使用连词（e.g. because, so, which）使表达更连贯，并纠正拼写/用词（例如 “let you peek into others' lives”, “inspire you to explore the world”）。

Example: Yes, I do. I’ve enjoyed reading since childhood because it lets me peek into other people’s lives and inspires me to explore different cultures. For example, novels often show daily life in foreign countries, which makes me curious to learn more. That’s why reading remains one of my favorite hobbies.

Suggestion: 注意词汇准确性和句子完整性。避免断句与拼写错误（如“book”而不是“bow”），删除多余词并保持逻辑连贯。可以用一个主题句说明偏好，随后用1-2个具体原因支持，并使用连接词（for example, because）提升流畅性。

Example: I prefer reading on paper, especially for whole books, because holding a physical book feels more tangible and helps me concentrate. For example, I can flip back and forth easily and I find paper much gentler on my eyes than long periods of screen reading.

Suggestion: 语法与句子结构有误并且句子断裂严重，需改进时态、主谓一致与连贯性。明确用1句主题句回答，然后用具体例子区分“需要细读”和“不需要细读”的情况。纠正词汇错误（e.g. “depend”→“depends”, “scan” not “skin”），并用连接词（such as, whereas）提高逻辑性。

Example: It depends on how important the information is. For example, I read exam instructions and work-related emails carefully to avoid mistakes, whereas I usually just scan social media news updates to get the main idea quickly.

Suggestion: 总体结构清晰，但有小的语法和拼写错误（如 “firsts” → “first”）。可以将句子更紧凑，用连词连接前后句，保持在最多5句内，增加一点具体细节（what makes it 'useful'）会更好。

Example: I usually scan an article first and then read it in detail if needed, because scanning helps me decide whether it’s worth my time. For instance, I check headings and key sentences to see if the content is relevant to my research or interests before reading fully.

× Reading is something I have been enjoying since my childhood.

✓ Reading is something I have enjoyed since my childhood.

句中使用現在完成進行時（have been enjoying）與表示從兒時開始持續至今的狀態不太合適。此處要表達從過去到現在的一直喜歡，用現在完成式（have enjoyed）更簡潔準確。建議用現在完成式表達從過去持續到現在的經驗或偏好。

× I love it because it letsplay Ek into others's lives and inspire you to explore the world yourself.

✓ I love it because it lets you peek into others' lives and inspires you to explore the world yourself.

原句含有拼寫錯誤及動詞形式錯誤：“letsplay Ek”應為“lets you peek”；另外主句主語是 it，從句中動詞需保持單數第三人稱形式，應為 inspires。建議檢查拼寫並保持主語與動詞的一致。

× It's like creating your own little word.

✓ It's like creating your own little world.

此處為拼寫錯誤，“word”（詞）應為“world”（世界）。拼寫錯誤會改變意思，建議注意常見詞的正確拼寫。

× Holding the physical bow just gives you the tangible and concrete feeling that eBooks can't give you.

✓ Holding the physical book just gives you the tangible, concrete feeling that eBooks can't give you.

原句“bow”為拼寫錯誤，應為“book”。此外，“tangible and concrete feeling”中兩個形容詞並列時用逗號分隔更自然。請注意單詞拼寫及形容詞連用時的標點。

× It helps me concentrate better and.

✓ It helps me concentrate better.

原句在連詞“and”後無接續成分，造成句子結構不完整。應刪除多餘的“and”或補全後半句，這裡刪掉“and”即可使句子完整。

× It is depend on the importance level of the information.

✓ It depends on the importance level of the information.

主語 it 與動詞需符合簡單現在時第三人稱單數，應使用 depends 而不是 is depend。建議掌握主語-動詞的一致性及常用動詞的正確形態。

× Academic papers are work related emails.

✓ Academic papers are for study; work-related items are emails.

原句語意混亂、句子結構不明。作者可能想區分學術文件與工作相關郵件，需重寫為兩個並列部分或用分號。建議把不同類別分開表述，並在“work-related”中加入連字符。

× But for things like news updates on social media posts.

✓ But for things like news updates on social media posts, I usually skim to get the main idea.

該句缺少謂語動詞，導致不完整。需補充動作（如 skim）以完成句子。建議在此類句子中提供動詞並保持語義完整。

× I really choose skin to get the main idea.

✓ I usually skim to get the main idea.

原句“choose skin”語序及單詞錯誤，應為“skim”（略讀）。此外“really choose”語意不自然，改為“usually skim”更符合習慣用法。建議使用正確動詞並注意副詞位置。

× I usually prefer scanning firsts and then doing detailed reading if needed.

✓ I usually prefer scanning first and then doing detailed reading if needed.

“firsts”為錯誤複數形式，應為“first”。句子結構上“prefer scanning first”是自然表達。建議注意副詞和名詞的單複數形式。

× For example, when I read an article online, I will scan the headings and key sentences first.

✓ For example, when I read an article online, I scan the headings and key sentences first.

此句中使用一般陳述時刻（習慣性動作）時更適合用現在時（I scan）而不是未來式（I will scan）。建議根據語境選擇時態：描述習慣用一般現在時。

× And only read it in detail if it is really useful.

✓ I only read it in detail if it is really useful.

原句以連詞“And”開頭且缺主語，句子不完整。應補上主語“I”並使用一般現在時以描述習慣性行為。建議避免用連詞開頭導致句子碎片，保持完整主語與動詞。