Reading— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Reduce repetition, use a clear topic sentence and add a brief specific example. Keep answer within 2–3 sentences and avoid filler words. Use one strong opinion sentence then support it with a specific reason or example.

Example: Yes, I enjoy reading because it helps me learn about different cultures and ideas. For example, I recently read a biography about Malala Yousafzai that taught me a lot about education and resilience.

Suggestion: State your preference clearly, avoid grammar errors and fragmented sentences. Give a concise reason with one or two specific effects and a brief contrast using a linking word like 'however' or 'while'.

Example: I prefer reading on paper because it feels more comfortable and reduces eye strain. However, I sometimes read on a screen when I need quick access to online articles.

Suggestion: Answer with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar, and provide 1–2 specific examples of situations needing careful reading versus casual reading. Use linking words like 'for example' or 'whereas'.

Example: I need to read carefully when dealing with important documents, for example work assignments or legal papers, because errors can have consequences. Whereas I don't read carefully when I'm browsing social media or light entertainment.

Suggestion: Give a direct answer naming the preferred method for different situations, correct grammar, and complete sentences. Use linking words ('however', 'when') and provide a brief illustrative example for each method.

Example: I prefer detailed reading for important materials such as reports or study texts so I don't miss key information. However, I use scanning for light content like short news items or funny stories to get the main idea quickly.

× I prefer reading on paper because it is more healthier.

✓ I prefer reading on paper because it is healthier.

'More healthier' is redundant because 'healthier' is already the comparative form of 'healthy'. Use either 'more healthy' (less common) or 'healthier'. The correct comparative is 'healthier'. Suggestion: Use 'healthier' without 'more'.

× It can prevent many. Disease such as eye strain or headache.

✓ It can prevent many diseases, such as eye strain or headaches.

The original is fragmented and has incorrect punctuation and singular/plural mismatch. 'Many.' breaks the sentence. 'Disease' should be plural 'diseases' and 'headache' should match plurality: 'headaches'. Also add a comma before 'such as'. Suggestion: Combine fragments and ensure correct plural forms and punctuation.

× By contrast, if you people.

✓ By contrast, it does not affect people as much.

'If you people.' is an incomplete clause and informal. The sentence fragment lacks a verb and clear subject-verb relationship. Replace with a complete clause that contrasts with the previous idea. Suggestion: Use a full clause like 'it does not affect people as much' or 'people are less affected.'

× When I reading some. Important papers such as assignments from my boss or Clouseau materials I need to pay more attention.

✓ When I read important papers, such as assignments from my boss or course materials, I need to pay more attention.

'When I reading' is incorrect because the verb needs the base form 'read' after 'when I'. The original also has punctuation issues and a misspelling 'Clouseau' should be 'course'. Add commas to separate the clause. Suggestion: Use 'When I read...' and correct spelling to 'course materials.'

× Like I said, when I am reading important materials I you do detailed meeting.

✓ Like I said, when I am reading important materials I do detailed reading.

The phrase 'I you do detailed meeting' is ungrammatical: mixed pronouns and wrong noun 'meeting' instead of 'reading'. Use 'I do detailed reading' or 'I read them carefully'. Also add a comma after the introductory phrase. Suggestion: Use 'I do detailed reading' or 'I read them carefully.'

× However when I read some comedian stories.

✓ However, when I read some comic stories, I do not read so carefully.

This is a sentence fragment lacking the main clause. 'Comedian stories' is incorrect collocation; 'comic stories' or 'comedy stories' is better. Provide a complete contrast clause to finish the thought. Suggestion: Complete the sentence: 'However, when I read some comic stories, I do not read so carefully.'

× Yeah, I enjoy reading books because it's it's a great way to expand my knowledge.

✓ Yeah, I enjoy reading books because it's a great way to expand my knowledge.

The error is a duplication 'it's it's'. This is a speech disfluency; remove the repeated 'it's'. Suggestion: Say 'it's a great way...' without repetition.

× I think reading is the most necessary activity for individuals.

✓ I think reading is a very important activity for individuals.

'Most necessary' is awkward and often unnatural in English; 'very important' or 'essential' is clearer. 'Most necessary' can be used but sounds odd. Suggestion: Use 'a very important activity' or 'an essential activity.'