Reading— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 문법과 표현의 정확성을 높이고 발화의 자연스러움을 개선하세요. 특히 시제를 일관되게 사용하고 불필요한 중복(예: "sometimes I usually")을 제거하세요. 또한 ‘watching videos about books’와 같은 표현으로 구체화하고, 토픽 문장 뒤에 간단한 이유나 예를 덧붙여 답변을 풍부하게 만드세요.

Example: I don't read books regularly, but I sometimes watch YouTube videos that introduce entertaining novels. For example, I follow a channel that summarizes new fiction, which helps me decide what to read next.

Suggestion: 문장 구조와 단어 형태를 정확히 사용하세요(예: 'screens make'로 복수 형태 일치). 시작 발화는 명확한 주제문으로 하고, 두 번째 문장은 왜 그런지 연결어로 자연스럽게 이어가세요. 중복 표현(예: 'tired and exhausted')을 피하고 더 구체적인 예시를 하나 제시하세요.

Example: I prefer reading on paper rather than on a screen because screens make my eyes tired quickly. For instance, when I read on paper I can study for several hours without discomfort.

Suggestion: 문법적 오류와 철자 실수를 고치세요('may ideas' → 'main ideas'). 또한 질문에 직접 답한 후 구체적인 상황을 연결어로 명확히 제시하여 응답을 더 조직적으로 만드세요.

Example: I need to read carefully when the material is important because I have to remember main ideas and details. For example, I read carefully when I'm studying for an exam or reviewing a work report.

Suggestion: 문장을 더욱 간결하고 자연스럽게 다듬고 연결어를 정확히 사용하세요('even though' 대신 'although' 또는 'while' 사용 가능). 또한 구체적인 예시나 결과를 추가해 답을 풍부하게 만드세요.

Example: I prefer detailed reading rather than scanning because it helps me remember ideas and plotlines more accurately. Although it takes longer, it usually leads to better retention when I study for exams or analyze a book.

× Actually I don't regularly read books, but sometimes I usually watching videos introducing funny novels in YouTube.

✓ Actually I don't regularly read books, but sometimes I usually watch videos introducing funny novels on YouTube.

'watching' after 'usually' is incorrect because modal/adverb + base verb structure requires base form 'watch'; use present simple 'watch' for habitual actions. Also use preposition 'on' with YouTube, not 'in'. Suggestion: say 'I usually watch videos on YouTube' or 'sometimes I watch videos introducing novels on YouTube.'

× Or on a screen. I prefer reading on paper to reading on a screen because screens quickly makes my eye tired and exhausted.

✓ Or on a screen. I prefer reading on paper to reading on a screen because screens quickly make my eyes tired and exhausted.

Subject 'screens' is plural, so verb should be 'make' not 'makes' (third person singular). Also 'my eye' should be plural 'my eyes' when referring to both; use 'eye' only for one eye. Suggestion: 'screens quickly make my eyes tired.'

× Also, I can read books for a long time on the paper.

✓ Also, I can read books for a long time on paper.

The definite article 'the' is unnecessary with 'paper' here; use 'on paper' as an uncountable noun phrase. Suggestion: 'read on paper' without 'the.'

× I need to read carefully when I read important texts or articles because I have to remember may ideas and details, for example when I am studying for an exam or reading a work report.

✓ I need to read carefully when I read important texts or articles because I have to remember many ideas and details, for example when I am studying for an exam or reading a work report.

Typographical error 'may' should be 'many' to indicate quantity. Tenses are otherwise appropriate: present simple for general truth and present continuous for ongoing action. Suggestion: proofread for typos and use 'many' for countable plural nouns.

× I prefer detailed reading to scanning because I can remember ideas and stories more accurately. Even though it takes long time, it is more beneficial to remember.

✓ I prefer detailed reading to scanning because I can remember ideas and stories more accurately. Even though it takes a long time, it is more beneficial for remembering.

Missing article: 'a long time' requires 'a'. Also 'beneficial to remember' is awkward; use 'beneficial for remembering' or 'more beneficial for memory.' Suggestion: 'it is more beneficial for remembering' or 'it helps me remember more.'