Reading— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and vary sentence structure. Start with a clear topic sentence, give two specific reasons with brief examples, and avoid repetition. Use linking words (for example, because, so, therefore) and correct small grammar errors (e.g., "I don't have enough patience" is fine; say "I don't have enough time to sit and read" instead of "to be on the book reading").

Example: No, I don't really enjoy reading. Mainly, I lack patience and I often fall asleep when I read, so I can't finish books. Also, I have a busy schedule and rarely find time to sit down and concentrate on a book. For example, I usually read short news articles on my phone instead of novels.

Suggestion: Give a clear topic sentence and two specific reasons with correct grammar and linking words. Avoid vague phrases and repeat vocabulary less. Replace informal phrasing (e.g., "ours phone it's always keep on your hands") with clearer expressions like "I always have my phone with me."

Example: I prefer reading on a screen. Firstly, I always have my phone with me, so it's convenient to check news or articles anytime. Secondly, digital text is easier to search and adjust (for example, I can change font size), which makes reading faster and more comfortable.

Suggestion: Structure the response with a clear contrast: say when careful reading is necessary and when it is not. Use concise, grammatically correct phrases and give a specific example (e.g., reading contracts vs. quick messages). Avoid unclear words like "accent" if you mean "point" or "issue."

Example: I need to read carefully when the material affects my work or responsibilities, for example, when I read a contract or an important email before a meeting. In contrast, I don't read carefully when browsing social media or headlines, because I only want the general idea.

Suggestion: Answer directly, then qualify with reasons and a specific example. Use correct vocabulary ('scanning' vs 'detailed reading') and avoid repetition. Replace unclear words like "accent" and "tales reading" with precise terms like "topic" or "articles."

Example: I prefer scanning most of the time because I often read news and only need the main points. However, if the topic is important or I need to learn details, I switch to detailed reading. For instance, I scan news headlines during my commute but read full reports carefully when researching for work.

× I don't have enough time to be on the book reading and trying to understand what he means.

✓ I don't have enough time to sit down and read a book and try to understand what it means.

The original sentence uses an unnatural verb phrase 'to be on the book reading' and mixes gerunds and infinitives incorrectly. Use 'to sit down and read' (infinitive) and parallel structure 'read a book and try to understand'. Also replace 'he means' with 'it means' because 'book' is inanimate; use the appropriate pronoun.

× And especially when I try to read, I fall asleep.

✓ Especially when I try to read, I fall asleep.

Beginning a sentence with 'And' is informal and unnecessary. The rest of the sentence is grammatically correct; removing 'And' makes the sentence more natural in spoken answers.

× I don't really like.

✓ I really don't like reading.

The original fragment 'I don't really like.' lacks an object and is a sentence fragment. Reorder to 'I really don't like reading' to include the object and correct word order for emphasis.

× I prefer to read on a screen because I think when you read on the screen we already use ours phone it's always keep on your hands and it's make your life easy to to read the newspaper to read the news everything is easier than try to read a book.

✓ I prefer to read on a screen because when you read on a screen we already use our phones; they are always in our hands and make it easier to read newspapers and news. Everything is easier than trying to read a book.

Multiple pronoun and agreement errors: 'ours phone' should be 'our phones' (possessive pronoun with plural noun). Use consistent pronouns: 'they' for 'phones'. Fix verb forms: 'it's always keep on your hands' -> 'they are always in our hands'; 'it's make' -> 'make' or 'they make'. Also change 'to to read' to 'to read' and 'try to read a book' to 'trying to read a book' for parallel gerund usage.

× I need read carefully when I know that I have one important message or I have one important accent to speak with someone or have a meeting or I have uh important action to to to speak with someone.

✓ I need to read carefully when I know that I have an important message, an important point to discuss with someone, a meeting, or an important matter to talk about.

Missing infinitive particle 'to' after 'need' (should be 'need to read'). 'One important accent' is incorrect word choice; 'point' or 'matter' is appropriate. Remove repeated fillers and duplicate 'to'. Use articles correctly: 'an important' before words starting with a vowel sound.

× I prefer to read on a screen because I think when you read on the screen we already use ours phone it's always keep on your hands and it's make your life easy to to read the newspaper to read the news everything is easier than try to read a book.

✓ I prefer to read on a screen because when you read on a screen we already use our phones; they are always in our hands and make it easier to read newspapers and news. Everything is easier than trying to read a book.

Preposition use: 'keep on your hands' is incorrect; use 'in your hands' or 'in our hands'. Also 'read on the screen' is acceptable but 'read on a screen' is more natural when speaking generally. Ensure consistent preposition usage.

× I should say I prefer scanning but it depends of the accent or it depends of umm how much time I have I have to read but often I usually read the tales reading because I like to read a lot of news and or news.

✓ I would say I prefer scanning, but it depends on the topic or how much time I have. Often I usually skim articles because I like to read a lot of news.

Modal and tense phrasing: 'I should say' is better as 'I would say' for opinion. Preposition 'depends of' should be 'depends on'. 'Accent' is the wrong word; 'topic' or 'subject' is appropriate. 'Tales reading' is unclear; replace with 'skim articles' or 'skim reading'. Remove redundant words 'often I usually'—use one adverb of frequency.