Chatting— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence stating whether you like chatting, then add one or two specific activities you discuss with friends. Avoid repetition and awkward phrasing.

Example: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends. We often talk about our shared memories and plan activities like day trips or hiking together.

Suggestion: Give a clear topic sentence and use specific, grammatically correct phrases. Use linking words to list topics and avoid repeating words. Provide one brief example to illustrate.

Example: We usually talk about school and our future plans. For example, we discuss our subjects, career goals, and steps we need to take to reach them.

Suggestion: State your preference clearly, then explain reasons with linking words (because/so). Use correct sentence structure and a short example. Avoid vague phrases like "that people."

Example: I prefer chatting in a group because everyone can share their problems and offer different suggestions. For instance, when I had difficulty choosing subjects, my friends gave me several useful ideas.

Suggestion: Answer directly about current preference, not childhood, unless relevant. Use contrast linking words (but/although) and correct verbs. Keep it concise and specific about situations when you use each method.

Example: I prefer face-to-face communication because it's more personal and clearer, but when I'm busy I use social media to stay in touch, for example, sending quick messages or group chats.

Suggestion: Be clear about whether you argue often and give a specific reason. Use polite language when describing disagreements and correct vocabulary for habits. Give one brief example and a result or how you resolve it.

Example: Yes, sometimes we argue about personal choices like fashion or habits. For example, I once disagreed with a friend about dyeing hair for school; I explained my concerns calmly and we agreed to respect each other's opinions.

× I really like to enjoy chatting with my friends and I really like to talk about our history and going out for like a visiting, traveling with hiking.

✓ I really enjoy chatting with my friends, talking about our past, and going out for activities like visiting places, traveling, and hiking.

The original mixes 'like to' + verb and gerunds awkwardly. Use 'enjoy' with a gerund (chatting). Parallel list items should have the same form: 'chatting', 'talking', 'going out'. Also 'a visiting' is incorrect; use 'visiting places' and separate 'traveling' and 'hiking' as items. Suggestion: Use consistent gerund forms for coordinated activities and clear nouns for places.

× We usually chat about with my friends, our school level and what what is your future and what can you do in a futures and what's your goals.

✓ We usually chat with my friends about our school, our futures, what we can do in the future, and our goals.

The phrase 'chat about with' is redundant; use 'chat with' or 'chat about'. 'School level' is better as 'school' or 'our studies'. 'What what is your future' is ungrammatical; use 'our futures' or 'what we will do in the future'. 'Futures' should be 'future' or 'futures' depending on meaning; here plural 'futures' or 'the future' works with 'our'. Also fix word order and plurality for 'goals'. Suggestion: Use 'chat with' + 'about' only when separating objects: 'chat with X about Y'.

× I prefer a group of that people because in a group of people we share our problems in everyone.

✓ I prefer a group of people because in a group we share our problems with everyone.

'That people' is incorrect; use 'people' or 'those people'. 'Share our problems in everyone' has wrong preposition and pronoun; correct is 'share our problems with everyone'. Also omit redundant 'of people' after 'group'. Suggestion: Use 'share X with Y' structure and 'group of people' or simply 'group'.

× They suggest our giving us some solutions for our problems and.

✓ They suggest solutions to us for our problems.

'Suggest our giving us' is ungrammatical. 'Suggest solutions to us' or 'give us some solutions' are correct. Also remove trailing 'and'. Suggestion: Choose either 'They suggest solutions' or 'They give us solutions'.

× Uh, when I was three, I like to commit, communicate face to face, but in a, in a busy time, I really like to go, really like to chat with, in a social media with my friends.

✓ When I was three, I liked to communicate face to face, but when I am busy, I prefer to chat with my friends on social media.

The sentence mixes past and present incorrectly. 'When I was three' requires past tense 'liked'. For current habitual preference use present 'prefer' or 'like'. 'Commit' is wrong word; use 'communicate'. Use 'on social media' not 'in a social media'. Clean up repetitions and fillers. Suggestion: Keep tenses consistent: past for past habits, present for current habits; use 'on social media'.

× Yeah, I'm argue with my friends because my friends are going in a bad habit, like, uh, coloring of their hairs and the nail, nail pulleys.

✓ Yes, I argue with my friends because some of them have developed bad habits, like dyeing their hair and damaging their nails.

'I'm argue' is wrong; use 'I argue' or 'I am arguing'. 'Are going in a bad habit' is incorrect; use 'have developed a bad habit' or 'have bad habits'. 'Coloring of their hairs' should be 'dyeing their hair' and 'nail pulleys' is unclear; 'damaging their nails' fits likely meaning. Suggestion: Use correct verb forms for simple present and clearer vocabulary for actions on hair and nails.

× And I like to suggest that you don't do that in school and your future is right by yourself.

✓ I like to advise them not to do that at school because it can affect their future.

'Suggest that you don't do that' is awkward addressed to friends; if referring to friends use 'advise them'. 'Your future is right by yourself' is ungrammatical; intended meaning is 'it can affect their future' or 'their future is their own responsibility'. Suggestion: Use 'advise someone not to do something' and express the consequence clearly, e.g., 'because it can affect their future'.