Chatting— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Make your answer clear and concise. Start with a direct topic sentence, correct grammar (e.g., "I prefer chatting with friends and family"), and give one or two specific supporting details. Use linking words like "because" or "and" correctly. Avoid redundancy and keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Example: Yes, I prefer chatting with friends and family because it helps me relax. For example, we often catch up about our day or call each other if there’s an emergency, so I feel supported.

Suggestion: Provide a clear topic sentence and specific examples. Organize ideas with linking words (e.g., "for example", "also"). Avoid unclear phrases and repetition. Limit to 2–3 sentences and give one or two concrete topics you discuss.

Example: We usually talk about plans, for example shopping or weekend trips to nearby cities. We also discuss where to eat and what activities to try when we go out.

Suggestion: Give a clear preference and explain briefly with structured sentences. Use linking words like "because" and "so" to connect reason and result. Avoid hesitations and repetition. Keep answer within 2–3 sentences.

Example: It depends, but I usually prefer group chats for planning weekends because more people can give ideas. If I need help with something personal or work-related, I message one friend individually.

Suggestion: State a clear preference and give a specific reason. Use correct phrases (e.g., "face-to-face") and avoid unclear clauses. Mention when you choose each method, using linking words like "but" or "however". Keep it concise to 2–3 sentences.

Example: I prefer face-to-face communication when I have time because it feels more personal. However, if I’m busy or tired, I usually use social media or WhatsApp to stay in touch.

Suggestion: Answer directly and give a clear reason and an example. Use correct grammar (e.g., "argue about") and linking words like "for example". Keep to 2 sentences: one stating frequency, one giving a specific reason or example.

Example: Sometimes I argue with my friends, especially when they share incorrect news. For example, if someone posts a misleading article, I point out the facts and we discuss it calmly.

× Yes, I prefer setting with my friends or family because it's a good idea to conversation for our talking.

✓ Yes, I prefer sitting with my friends or family because it's a good idea to have a conversation together.

The student used 'setting' instead of the gerund 'sitting' (spelling/word choice) and 'to conversation for our talking' is incorrect structure. Use 'have a conversation' or 'talk' with correct verb+noun collocation. Suggestion: use common collocations like 'sit with', 'have a conversation', or 'talk with'.

× If you have any emergency issue at that time, I call my friends at.

✓ If you have an emergency at that time, I will call my friends.

The original lacks a proper modal/tense construction and has extra preposition 'at'. Use 'will' for future intention after 'if' in spoken promise contexts, and use 'an emergency' (article). Also remove the trailing 'at'.

× Otherwise I prefer chatting.

✓ Otherwise, I prefer chatting.

Minor punctuation: add comma after 'Otherwise'. The phrase 'prefer chatting' is correct as gerund; only punctuation needed. Suggestion: include comma for clarity in speech transcriptions.

× I usually prefer to chat with my friends if we are going to outside or making plan for shopping or or traveling from one city to another on weekends to chill out at that time exactly.

✓ I usually prefer to chat with my friends when we are going out, making plans for shopping, or traveling from one city to another on weekends to relax.

Problems include wrong preposition 'to outside' (should be 'going out'), singular/plural 'making plan' -> 'making plans', redundant words 'or or', awkward phrase 'at that time exactly' and word choice 'chill out' -> 'relax'. Tense 'are going out' is fine; simplified parallel structure improves clarity.

× We have also improved four friends and renaming chill out.

✓ We are also a group of four friends who enjoy relaxing together.

Original sentence is ungrammatical. 'Have also improved four friends' makes no sense; likely intent: 'we are four friends' or 'we have four close friends'. Use correct subject-verb structure and natural phrasing. Suggestion: state relationship clearly, e.g., 'We are four friends' or 'We are a group of four friends'.

× Well I prefer chatting with group of people or individually also because if I any if I have any work with individual so at that time I message individually and if I have some plan of weekend to go outside so at that time I prepare for a group of people chatting.

✓ Well, I prefer chatting with a group of people or individually because if I have any work with an individual, I message them individually; but if I have weekend plans to go out, I prepare to chat with a group of people.

Errors: missing articles 'a group', 'an individual', incorrect pronoun/reference 'message individually' needs object 'them', redundant words 'if I any if I'. Also 'plan of weekend' -> 'weekend plans', 'go outside' -> 'go out'. Sentence was run-on; split or use punctuation for clarity.

× It's the best on my time schedule if I have time so at that time I'm perfectly to face communication with my friends, family if my schedule is tired.

✓ Face-to-face communication is best when I have time, but if my schedule is tiring, I prefer other options.

Original misuses 'I'm perfectly to face communication' and 'my schedule is tired' (schedules cannot be tired). Use noun 'face-to-face communication' and correct adjective 'tiring' for schedule, or 'if I'm tired'. Suggestion: rephrase to 'if I'm busy or tired' as natural alternatives.

× So at that time I eat, prefer social media or chatting on WhatsApp so so.

✓ At those times, I prefer using social media or chatting on WhatsApp.

Original contains extraneous 'I eat' and repeated 'so so'. Preposition/verb usage: 'prefer using' or 'prefer to use' social media; remove unrelated words. Suggestion: keep concise: 'I prefer using social media or WhatsApp.'

× Sometimes I argue with my friends regarding some wrong news if they give me wrong news so I tell him this is right or wrong.

✓ Sometimes I argue with my friends about incorrect news; if they tell me something false, I tell them whether it is right or wrong.

Problems: 'regarding some wrong news' awkward -> 'about incorrect news'; pronoun disagreement 'tell him' should be 'tell them' to match 'friends' (plural). Also streamline sentence and use present simple for habitual actions.

× So we are go also on some newspaper topics sometimes.

✓ Sometimes we also discuss topics from the newspaper.

Original 'we are go also' is ungrammatical. Use 'discuss' to indicate talking about topics and place adverb 'sometimes' appropriately. Suggestion: 'We sometimes discuss newspaper topics.'