Chatting— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid incorrect word choices (e.g., "revert" for "reply"), reduce redundancy, and use one linking phrase to add a reason. Also limit to 2–3 sentences and correct grammar (e.g., "this is the most convenient way").

Example: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it’s the most convenient way to stay in touch. Also, it lets them reply when they’re free, which shows respect for their time.

Suggestion: Be more organized and correct grammar: open with a topic sentence, then give two specific supporting details with linking words. Avoid filler sounds and redundant phrases, and use correct pluralization and word forms ("nutrition" not "nutritions").

Example: I usually chat about work-related case studies because most of my friends are dietitians, so we share updates and discuss patient cases. I also use chat to make plans, such as arranging times and places for going out.

Suggestion: Use clearer sentence structures and correct verb forms; begin with a direct topic sentence, then give specific reasons using linking words. Make sure to pluralize and use articles where needed ("It depends", "tasks", "a personal matter").

Example: It depends on the situation. For teamwork I prefer group chats because they help coordinate tasks and gather ideas, but for personal matters I prefer chatting one-on-one to keep things private and focused.

Suggestion: Clarify and correct grammar: start with a direct preference, then give two clear, specific reasons using linking words. Fix grammar and collocations ("face-to-face communication", "this allows me to understand", "sense of presence"). Keep to 2–3 sentences.

Example: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows me to understand information more clearly by observing facial expressions and gestures. Also, being physically present helps me pick up on tone and other nonverbal cues.

Suggestion: Respond directly and naturally: say whether you argue and why, using correct phrasing and fewer vague words. Avoid fillers, correct tense and collocations ("arguments happen sometimes", "we argue about cases at work"). Provide one concise reason and an example if needed.

Example: Yes, we sometimes argue, especially about work-related cases, because we challenge each other’s opinions to find better solutions. These debates actually strengthen our understanding and relationship.

× Definitely, I do enjoy chatting with my friends because this is the convenient way to get in touch with them.

✓ Definitely, I do enjoy chatting with my friends because this is a convenient way to get in touch with them.

The definite article 'the' before 'convenient way' is inappropriate because the speaker refers to one of many possible convenient ways, not a specific unique one. Use the indefinite article 'a'. Suggestion: use 'a convenient way'. Grammar Problem Type ID: 22

× Moreover, I really don't disturb them by calling at any time during a chatting.

✓ Moreover, I really don't disturb them by calling at any time during a chat.

The phrase 'during a chatting' is incorrect because 'chatting' is a gerund and we normally say 'a chat' or 'chatting' without 'a'. Also 'during' with 'a chat' is acceptable. Suggestion: use 'a chat' or 'when I chat'. Grammar Problem Type ID: 11

× I allow them to take their time to revert me.

✓ I allow them to take their time to reply to me.

The verb 'revert' is incorrect in this context; in standard English we use 'reply' or 'respond', and we need the preposition 'to' after 'reply' when indicating the recipient. Suggestion: use 'reply to me' or 'respond to me'. Grammar Problem Type ID: 9

× This is the only way I can respect their time as well as pass my message.

✓ This is the best way to respect their time and convey my message.

The original is awkward: 'can respect their time as well as pass my message' mixes modal 'can' unnecessarily and uses 'pass my message' which is non-idiomatic. Use parallel structure 'respect their time and convey my message.' Suggestion: rephrase for clarity and natural collocations. Grammar Problem Type ID: 26

× I always chat about lots of case studies regarding my work on food and nutritions because most of my friends are dietitians and we are sharing the same profession, so we keep each other updated.

✓ I always chat about lots of case studies regarding my work on food and nutrition because most of my friends are dietitians and we share the same profession, so we keep each other updated.

'Nutritions' is incorrect; 'nutrition' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized. Also 'we are sharing' is less natural than simple present 'we share' for habitual action. Suggestion: use 'nutrition' and 'we share'. Grammar Problem Type ID: 22

× And secondly, if I have any plan with them, uh, to going out, I share my plan by, uh, chatting and.

✓ And secondly, if I have any plans with them to go out, I share my plan by chatting.

'To going out' is incorrect; use the infinitive 'to go out'. 'Any plan' should be plural 'any plans' for typical collocations. The trailing 'and' is incomplete and should be removed. Suggestion: 'any plans to go out' and 'share my plan by chatting.' Grammar Problem Type ID: 11

× It depend upon the situation.

✓ It depends on the situation.

The verb must agree with the singular subject 'It', so use 'depends' (third person singular). Also 'depend upon' is acceptable but 'depends on' is more natural. Suggestion: 'It depends on the situation.' Grammar Problem Type ID: 27

× If I'm working on a group project, I prefer group chat because they help coordinate task and gather idea from everyone.

✓ If I'm working on a group project, I prefer group chats because they help coordinate tasks and gather ideas from everyone.

Pluralize 'group chat' to 'group chats' when speaking generally, and 'task' and 'idea' should be plural: 'tasks' and 'ideas'. Suggestion: maintain number agreement for countable nouns. Grammar Problem Type ID: 1

× But for personal matter I prefer to chat with one friend and keep the conversation private and focused.

✓ But for personal matters I prefer to chat with one friend and keep the conversation private and focused.

'Personal matter' should be plural 'personal matters' when speaking generally. Also include the article 'a' if using singular: 'for a personal matter'. Suggestion: use 'personal matters' or 'a personal matter' accordingly. Grammar Problem Type ID: 11

× I am extremely comfortable in face to face communications because this not allow to understand the information more clearly.

✓ I am extremely comfortable with face-to-face communication because this allows me to understand the information more clearly.

Use 'with' rather than 'in' for 'comfortable with'. 'Face-to-face' should be hyphenated as an adjective and 'communication' is uncountable singular here. 'This not allow' is incorrect: use 'this allows me' to match subject and include the object 'me'. Suggestion: 'comfortable with face-to-face communication' and 'allows me to'. Grammar Problem Type ID: 22

× By analyzing the facial expressions, gestures as well as voice modulation and secondly having the feel of presence someone we can also understand nonverbal thing.

✓ By analyzing facial expressions, gestures, and voice modulation, and by feeling someone's presence we can also understand nonverbal cues.

The sentence has multiple preposition and article errors: 'the facial expressions' is fine but unnecessary 'the'; 'having the feel of presence someone' is ungrammatical — use 'feeling someone's presence'. 'Nonverbal thing' should be 'nonverbal cues' (countable and idiomatic). Also add commas for clarity. Suggestion: restructure as shown. Grammar Problem Type ID: 11

× Definitely argument is also happen sometime.

✓ Definitely, arguments also happen sometimes.

Missing article before 'argument' — use plural 'arguments' for general statement. Verb phrase 'is also happen' is incorrect; use 'happen' as the main verb in plural noun sentence. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes'. Suggestion: 'arguments also happen sometimes.' Grammar Problem Type ID: 22

× If I discuss, I also make some argument.

✓ If I argue, I also make some arguments.

'Discuss' and 'make some argument' are awkward collocations. Use 'argue' for having an argument, and pluralize 'arguments' for generality. Suggestion: 'If I argue, I also make some arguments.' Grammar Problem Type ID: 8

× Uh, that's why we are not only friends who share a strong relationship but also understand each and each other more profoundly.

✓ That's why we are not only friends who share a strong relationship but also understand each other more deeply.

'Each and each other' is incorrect; correct phrase is 'each other'. 'More profoundly' is acceptable but 'more deeply' is more natural here. Also remove unnecessary 'are' or keep as 'we are not only friends... but also understand' is fine. Suggestion: 'understand each other more deeply.' Grammar Problem Type ID: 12

× And mostly I argue them on case.

✓ And mostly I argue with them about cases.

Use the verb 'argue with someone' not 'argue someone'. Also 'on case' is incorrect; use 'about cases' or 'about a case'. Suggestion: 'argue with them about cases.' Grammar Problem Type ID: 11