Chatting— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words (umm, uh), correct noun forms, and provide one specific supporting detail. Use linking words to connect ideas (for example, "and", "also").

Example: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends because it helps me learn new information and strengthen our relationships. For example, when we discuss books or news I often discover useful facts, and talking regularly feels like a friendly daily ritual.

Suggestion: Be specific and accurate: give one clear topic and a brief reason or example. Avoid confusing or incorrect references (e.g., "esports" doesn't match "hip hop artists"). Use a linking word like "because" or "for example" and keep to 2–3 sentences.

Example: We usually talk about K-pop artists because we all enjoy their music and performances. For example, we discuss new songs, choreography, and our favourite members, and sometimes we watch music videos together online.

Suggestion: Give a direct topic sentence, a clear reason, and a brief example. Fix grammar: use "I'm an introverted person" or "I'm not good at talking to many people". Remove fillers and redundant phrases.

Example: I prefer talking one-on-one because I'm an introverted person and conversations feel more comfortable. For example, in a one-on-one chat I can express my thoughts without interruptions and have deeper discussions.

Suggestion: Be concise and precise: state your preference, give a clear reason and a short example. Use correct phrasing like "read their emotions" or "see their facial expressions". Limit to 2–3 sentences and avoid repetition.

Example: I prefer face-to-face communication because I can see facial expressions and better understand people's emotions. For instance, when a friend looks worried I can notice it and offer support immediately.

Suggestion: Clarify your meaning with a direct statement and a simple reason. Avoid contradictory phrases and unclear words. Say whether arguments happen often or rarely, and give a brief example of a typical disagreement and how you resolve it.

Example: Yes, but rarely. We usually agree on most things, and when we do argue it's about small issues like plans or opinions; we calmly discuss the matter and often compromise.

× Yes umm, because I can get many information from the conversations and uh, and I can make great relationship with my friend.

✓ Yes, umm, because I can get a lot of information from conversations and I can build a good relationship with my friends.

'Information' is an uncountable noun, so use 'a lot of' instead of 'many'. Use plural 'friends' if referring generally, and 'build a good relationship' is more natural than 'make great relationship'. Also remove redundant 'the' before 'conversations' and repeat 'and'.

× Umm, also I think talking with my friend is a little greeting in my daily life.

✓ Also, I think talking with my friends is a small pleasure in my daily life.

'A little greeting' is unnatural here. Use a suitable noun like 'pleasure' and 'small' as an adjective. Use plural 'friends' if general. Maintain article 'a' before 'small pleasure'.

× I usually talk about the artist of K Pop because we like hip hop artists such as esports or Los Alam, so we always talk about them and it is very fantastic.

✓ I usually talk about K-pop artists because we like hip-hop artists such as Esports or Los Alam, so we always talk about them and it's really great.

Use 'K-pop artists' (no 'the artist of K Pop'). Standardize hyphenation 'K-pop', 'hip-hop'. 'Esports' and 'Los Alam' appear as names and should be capitalized. Replace 'it is very fantastic' with more natural 'it's really great'.

× I prefer to talk with a friend because I'm interested person, so I not good at talk with many people and I I would like to talk, uh, compactly.

✓ I prefer to talk with one friend because I'm an introverted person, so I'm not good at talking with many people and I would like to speak more concisely.

'Interested person' is incorrect; likely 'introverted' fits. Add article 'an' before 'introverted person'. Use 'I'm not good at talking' (verb+ing). 'Talk compactly' is unnatural; 'speak more concisely' is clearer. Remove duplicated 'I' and filler words.

× Uh, I prefer to talk face to face because I can watch their face and uh, I could get, I can get it about their emotional and feelings or feelings.

✓ I prefer to talk face to face because I can see their faces and understand their emotions and feelings.

Use 'see' rather than 'watch' for faces. 'Get it about' is incorrect; use 'understand'. Use plural 'faces' and 'emotions' (uncountable/ plural context). Remove redundant repetition 'feelings or feelings'.

× Yeah, but I sometimes do it because I don't. We don't have so much this course on discussion and we don't, we won't, we don't be opposite often.

✓ Yeah, but I only sometimes argue because we don't have many opportunities for discussion in this course, so we don't often disagree.

'We don't have so much this course on discussion' is ungrammatical; rephrase to 'we don't have many opportunities for discussion'. 'We don't be opposite' is incorrect; use 'we don't often disagree'. Avoid unnecessary modal confusion 'we won't' and fragments like 'because I don't'.