Chatting— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be direct and clear: start with a topic sentence answering the question, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Reduce hesitations and unclear phrases. Use correct tense and simpler vocabulary to express your meaning.

Example: I don't really enjoy chatting a lot with friends. When I'm busy I prefer not to text or call, and I often choose to relax quietly instead. However, I sometimes message friends when I have free time or need to make plans.

Suggestion: Open with a clear topic sentence, then give specific topics and an example. Use linking words like 'for example' or 'sometimes' and correct grammar (e.g., 'we both are exam candidates'). Avoid filler sounds.

Example: We usually chat about a variety of things, but mainly about our studies because we are both preparing for exams. For example, we exchange study tips and timetables, and sometimes we plan trips together when we need a break.

Suggestion: Answer clearly, give a reason and a brief example. Use correct phrasing ('I prefer one-on-one conversations because I am introverted') and avoid unclear sentences. Mention when you might join groups to show flexibility.

Example: I prefer talking one-on-one because I'm introverted and feel more comfortable in private conversations. However, I sometimes join group chats when there is important information to share or when friends are making plans.

Suggestion: Start with a clear choice or say it depends, then give specific situations for each option using linking words ('for example', 'when'). Correct grammar ('known people' -> 'people I know') and reduce hesitations.

Example: It depends on the situation. For people I know well, I prefer face-to-face conversations because they feel more personal. But for work or when I need to contact strangers, I usually use social media or messaging apps because it's more convenient.

Suggestion: Give a direct answer, explain why or when you argue, and avoid confusing or nonsensical phrases. Provide a brief example of a typical disagreement and use past tense correctly when describing events.

Example: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends, usually with my closest friends because we feel comfortable expressing strong opinions. For example, yesterday we argued about which study method is better, but we resolved it quickly and stayed friends.

× Not exactly. I like sitting, but not always when I was busy, the time I umm, calling there or uh, sending a boy's church. So typing chat is not always.

✓ Not exactly. I like chatting, but not always. When I am busy, for example calling someone or sending messages, I don't always chat by typing.

Multiple sentence structure and verb form issues: 'sitting' should be 'chatting' (wrong word/gerund), run-on sentence with unclear clauses, incorrect past tense 'was busy' should be present 'am busy' to match habitual action, 'calling there' and 'sending a boy's church' are unclear and incorrect prepositional/word choices. Suggest breaking into shorter sentences, use correct gerunds for activities (chatting, calling, sending messages), and maintain consistent present tense for habitual actions.

× Uh, usually we're chatting a lot of things. Uh, especially now we, uh, share our thought, uh, about study because of we both are else candidate or sometimes we talk about traveling, we planned about traveling.

✓ Usually we chat about many things. Right now we especially share our thoughts about studying because we are both exam candidates. Sometimes we talk about travel and plan trips.

Tense and form problems: 'we're chatting' implies continuous action—use simple present 'we chat' for habitual actions. 'share our thought' needs plural 'thoughts'. 'about study' should be 'about studying'. 'we both are else candidate' is incorrect; corrected to 'we are both exam candidates'. 'we planned about traveling' should be 'we plan trips' or 'we plan traveling' in present tense. Use consistent simple present for habitual activities and correct noun forms.

× I prefer single friends because of I my habit was introvert so I like to talk about one friends but why now peoples are rich me. I response on the on the group.

✓ I prefer talking to a single friend because I am introverted, so I like to speak with one person. But now more people have added me, so I respond in the group.

Pronoun and noun number errors: 'single friends' should be 'a single friend' (singular). 'I my habit was introvert' is incorrect pronoun and tense; use 'I am introverted' for a general trait. 'one friends' should be 'one friend'. 'peoples are rich me' is unintelligible; likely means 'more people have added me' or 'there are more people contacting me'. 'I response on the on the group' should be 'I respond in the group'. Use correct pronouns, singular/plural agreement, and appropriate verbs.

× Umm, actually it depends on our situation. I prefer both of when umm, or it's a known people that I want to communicate or face to face, but uh, we need to unknown people. Sometimes it needs a, uh, about any work at the time I manage it where social media.

✓ Actually, it depends on the situation. I prefer face-to-face communication when I know the person, but I use social media to communicate with people I do not know. Sometimes for work I manage communication through social media.

Confusing sentence structure and incorrect word choice: 'both of when' is unclear; separate ideas into clear sentences. 'it's a known people' should be 'a person I know' or 'someone I know'. 'we need to unknown people' should be 'people I do not know'. 'at the time I manage it where social media' is unclear; corrected to 'for work I manage communication through social media'. Keep sentences concise and use correct relative pronouns and prepositions.

× It is that I argue with my friends and many times, but it's happening with only my best friends. Yesterday I argue with the sheep.

✓ I do argue with my friends sometimes, but it usually happens only with my best friends. Yesterday I argued with them.

Tense and vocabulary errors: Use simple present 'I do argue' or 'I argue' for habitual actions and 'yesterday I argued' for past action. 'many times' is awkward—use 'sometimes' or 'often'. 'the sheep' is likely wrong word choice; replace with 'them' referring to friends. Ensure past tense for actions that happened yesterday and consistent subject reference.