Chatting— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be clearer and more natural: start with a direct topic sentence, correct vocabulary and avoid redundancy. Use one concise reason and one brief supporting detail with a linking word. For example, replace unclear phrases like "having a small top" with "having deep conversations" and remove repeated words.

Example: I prefer chatting with close friends rather than acquaintances because I'm more comfortable sharing personal thoughts. For instance, with my best friend I often talk about family and future plans, but with casual friends I usually keep conversations light and general.

Suggestion: Give a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, and add a specific detail. Use linking words to connect ideas (e.g., "because", "for example"). Correct grammar: say "since elementary school" and "jobs we will apply for in Saudi Arabia".

Example: I usually talk about future plans with my closest friend Vinya, who has been my friend since elementary school. For example, we often discuss applying for nursing jobs in Saudi Arabia because we hope to gain international experience.

Suggestion: Provide a clear stance and two contrasting reasons using linking words (e.g., "however", "because"). Remove fillers and fix minor errors like "by group" → "in a group" and complete the final clause.

Example: It depends on the situation: I enjoy chatting in a group when we are joking and having fun because it's lively, however I prefer one-on-one conversations with my friend Vinya for serious topics because I can speak more openly.

Suggestion: Start with a clear preference and give concise reasons with corrected vocabulary and grammar. Replace informal or unclear words ("ma messaging app") and remove hesitations. Provide one specific example of a platform and a reason.

Example: As an introvert, I prefer communicating via social media such as Instagram or WhatsApp because it's less stressful and gives me time to think. For example, I feel more comfortable writing messages than having direct eye contact during face-to-face conversations.

Suggestion: Be relevant and coherent: answer the question directly, avoid irrelevant or confusing details (e.g., "I don't like being in the bathrooms") and explain what you mean by "playful manner" with a brief example. Use linking words to clarify the reason.

Example: Yes, I sometimes argue with friends, but mostly in a playful way because we tease each other. For example, we might jokingly debate who is the clumsiest, and then laugh it off afterwards.

× It depends, I don't really like having a small top with someone unless it is my closest friend, but I like talking to my casual friends regarding things that are normal to talk about.

✓ It depends. I don't really like having small talk with someone unless they are my closest friend, but I do like talking with casual friends about ordinary things.

Original sentence has sentence run-on and wrong phrase 'small top' instead of 'small talk'; pronoun agreement 'someone' with 'it' is incorrect. Split into two sentences to improve clarity, use 'small talk' (correct collocation), use plural 'they' for a singular indefinite person, and use 'ordinary things' for natural phrasing.

× I usually talk with my closest friend Vinya, she is my closest friend from ever since elementary school and we we usually talk about job that we will apply in Saudi Arabia as a nurse.

✓ I usually talk with my closest friend Vinya. She has been my friend since elementary school, and we usually talk about jobs we will apply for in Saudi Arabia as nurses.

Original contains run-on sentence, repeated word 'we', incorrect tense and preposition 'from ever since', singular/plural mismatches 'job' vs 'jobs', missing preposition 'for', and article/number agreement for 'nurse'. Use present perfect 'has been' for a continuing state since the past, pluralize 'jobs' and 'nurses', and add 'for' after 'apply'. Split into sentences for clarity.

× Again, it depends on the situation. I like chatting with by group if we are making fun of something and uh, However, I like having a a serious talk with my closest friend Vinya in regards.

✓ Again, it depends on the situation. I like chatting with a group if we are joking about something; however, I prefer having a serious talk with my closest friend Vinya.

Original has incorrect preposition 'with by group', extra filler words, repeated article 'a a', and the incomplete phrase 'in regards'. Use 'with a group' or 'in a group' (correct preposition and article), remove fillers, and use 'however' correctly with punctuation. Use 'prefer' for contrast and remove unnecessary 'in regards'.

× As an introverted person, I I'd rather chat via social media through ma messaging app like Tiktok or a messenger or Instagram rather than uh, communicating with them face to face.

✓ As an introvert, I'd rather chat via social media using messaging apps like TikTok, Messenger, or Instagram rather than communicating with people face to face.

Original has redundant 'I I'd', misspelling 'ma', awkward 'through ma messaging app', inconsistent capitalization, and unclear noun 'them'. Use 'As an introvert' for natural phrasing, 'using messaging apps' for correct structure, capitalize proper nouns, and use 'people' instead of 'them'. The gerund 'communicating' is fine but fits better after 'rather than'.

× I can't really express myself whenever I'm having an eye contact with someone.

✓ I can't really express myself when I'm making eye contact with someone.

Use 'when' instead of 'whenever' for general statement; 'having an eye contact' is incorrect collocation — say 'making eye contact'. Remove unnecessary 'an' before 'eye contact'.

× Yes, most of the time I argue with my friend but in a playful manner. I don't like being in the bathrooms with someone. That is why I I handle things in a funny way.

✓ Yes, most of the time I argue with my friend in a playful way. I don't like being in the bathroom with someone, so I handle things in a humorous way.

Original has awkward placement 'but in a playful manner' and repeated 'I I'. Use 'in a playful way' for naturalness. 'Bathrooms' should be singular 'the bathroom' or 'a bathroom' depending on meaning; here 'the bathroom' fits better. 'That is why' is okay but combine into one sentence with 'so' for coherence. Replace 'funny' with 'humorous' for register consistency.