Rules— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and avoid repeating phrases. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give one specific supporting detail with a linking word. Use correct word forms (e.g., “for example” once, “time management” could be clearer).

Example: Yes. My school has several rules about assessment timing. For example, students must complete three tests each semester, which helps ensure steady progress.

Suggestion: Give a clear topic sentence, then support it with a specific reason using a linking word. Correct grammar (plural/singular agreement) and word choice (e.g., “students” not “student”) matter.

Example: No. I believe more rules would restrict students’ development because, for example, if a teacher enforces too many classroom rules, students may feel intimidated and stop asking questions.

Suggestion: Avoid tense inconsistency and incomplete sentences. Give one or two concrete examples of what the teacher did and the result, using linking words like “because” or “so”. Keep within four sentences maximum.

Example: Yes. My high school English teacher was very dedicated because she assigned frequent writing exercises and provided detailed handwritten feedback, which helped me improve my grammar and structure.

Suggestion: Correct spelling and article usage (roles → rules; a friendly). Start with a clear preference then give a specific benefit using linking words. Be concise and avoid repetition.

Example: I prefer fewer rules because a more relaxed atmosphere encourages students to ask questions and share opinions freely.

Suggestion: This answer has pronoun confusion (he/she) and incomplete ideas. Provide a clear topic sentence about strictness, then one concrete, complete example showing balance (e.g., strict in class but helpful outside). Use correct pronouns and finish the thought.

Example: Yes. My high school math teacher was very strict in class, often keeping a serious expression, but he was supportive outside lessons and spent extra time helping students prepare for exams.

Suggestion: Clarify unclear phrases (what is “Row 3 school”?) and be more specific about the difficulties. Start with a direct answer, then give one clear reason using a linking word such as “because” or “therefore.”

Example: No. I would not want to teach in a rule-free school because it would be difficult to maintain discipline and deliver structured lessons, which would make teaching less effective.

× No, I think more rules will limit the space that student can develop themselves.

✓ No, I think more rules will limit the space that students can use to develop themselves.

Subject 'student' should be plural 'students' to agree with 'more rules' and general statement. Also 'develop themselves' needs a clearer verb phrase; 'use to develop themselves' or 'for students to develop themselves' is more natural. Suggest using plural subjects for generalizations.

× For example, if one teacher have too many rules on the classroom, student cannot easily ask questions to teacher.

✓ For example, if one teacher has too many rules in the classroom, students cannot easily ask questions of the teacher.

The verb 'have' must agree with singular subject 'one teacher', so use 'has'. 'On the classroom' is incorrect preposition; use 'in the classroom'. 'Student' should be plural 'students' for general meaning. Use 'ask questions of the teacher' or 'ask the teacher questions' for correct preposition and word order.

× Yes, when I was a high school student, my English teacher was very dedicated and devoted to her students.

✓ Yes, when I was a high school student, my English teacher was very dedicated and devoted to her students.

No grammatical change required; sentence is correct. It uses past tense appropriately and subject-verb agreement is correct. (Included because only errors in list should be corrected; here none apply.)

× For example, she always asks us to do a lot of writing exercises, and she would write it very seriously and give.

✓ For example, she always asked us to do a lot of writing exercises, and she would mark them carefully and give feedback.

Tense consistency: the context is past, so 'asks' should be 'asked'. 'Would write it very seriously' is unnatural; likely 'would mark them carefully' is appropriate. 'Give' is incomplete; specify 'give feedback'. Also change 'it' to 'them' to match plural 'exercises'.

× I prefer fewer roles at school because I think this can provide an friendly atmosphere in the learning environment.

✓ I prefer fewer rules at school because I think this can provide a friendly atmosphere in the learning environment.

'Roles' is the wrong word; correct word is 'rules'. 'An friendly' is incorrect article use; 'friendly' begins with a consonant sound, so use 'a friendly'.

× Students are more willing to ask question there and give their own opinions in the classroom.

✓ Students are more willing to ask questions there and give their own opinions in the classroom.

'Question' should be plural 'questions' when speaking generally. The rest is correct.

× Yes, my high school math teacher was very stressed that he always had a poker face on the class.

✓ Yes, my high school math teacher was very strict; he always had a poker face in class.

'Stressed' is incorrect for describing a teacher's general manner; 'strict' fits the context. 'On the class' is wrong preposition; use 'in class'. Also split into two clauses for clarity and correct pronoun consistency if needed.

× However, she was dedicated to the student at other aspects.

✓ However, he was dedicated to the students in other ways.

Pronoun and number must match the teacher previously referred to as 'he'. 'Student' should be plural 'students'. 'At other aspects' is unnatural; use 'in other ways' to express different kinds of support.

× For example, he would like to spend a lot of time on.

✓ For example, he would spend a lot of time helping students understand difficult problems.

Original is incomplete and lacks an object. 'Would like to spend' suggests present desire but past context requires 'would spend'. Provide a clear object 'helping students understand difficult problems' to complete the sentence.

× No, I don't want to work as a teacher in a Row 3 school because I think in that kind of environment it is hard to control and teach your students.

✓ No, I don't want to work as a teacher in a rule-free school because I think in that kind of environment it is hard to control and teach students.

'Row 3' appears to be a typo for 'rule-free'. Remove 'your' to keep the statement general; use 'students'. The rest is grammatically acceptable.

× For example, students need to complete three tests in one semester.

✓ For example, students need to complete three tests in one semester.

Sentence is grammatically correct; modal usage 'need to' is appropriate for school requirement. (Included to show it meets list and no change needed.)