Rules— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答は質問に直接答えていますが、文法の誤りや冗長な表現が見られます。例えば、「student don't allowed」ではなく「students are not allowed」とするべきです。また、同じ意味の言葉の繰り返し（"some of some people"や"smell of smells"）は避け、より自然な表現を心がけましょう。具体的な理由を述べる際は、接続詞を使って論理的に繋げると良いです。

Example: Yes, there are several rules at my university. For example, students are not allowed to smoke on campus because many people dislike the smell, and smoking is harmful to health.

Suggestion: 回答は意見を述べていますが、表現が曖昧で論理のつながりが弱いです。"many more rules than now"や"follow the old things"の表現は不自然です。より明確で具体的な理由を述べ、接続詞を使って論理的に説明しましょう。

Example: Actually, I don't think more rules would benefit students because too many rules might restrict their freedom and limit creativity.

Suggestion: 回答に文法ミスや意味の不明瞭な部分が多く、内容も不十分です。"passionate teacher"は単数形に合わせて"teachers"にする必要があります。また、"passionate student"は文脈に合っていません。さらに、説明が不明瞭で、何を伝えたいのか分かりにくいです。具体的な例を挙げて、明確で簡潔な文章を心がけましょう。

Example: Yes, I do. For example, my seminar teacher Molly is very passionate. She encourages us to study hard so that we can improve our skills.

× For example student don't allowed to smoke in the university because some of some people don't like the smell of smells of smoking.

✓ For example, students aren't allowed to smoke in the university because some people don't like the smell of smoking.

The word 'student' should be plural 'students' to match the context of multiple students. Also, 'don't allowed' is incorrect; it should be 'aren't allowed' to correctly use the passive voice with the plural subject. The phrase 'some of some people' is redundant and should be simplified to 'some people'. 'Smell of smells of smoking' is repetitive; 'smell of smoking' is correct.

× In my university there are a lot of passionate teacher.

✓ In my university there are a lot of passionate teachers.

The noun 'teacher' should be plural 'teachers' because 'a lot of' refers to multiple individuals.

× For example, my seminar teacher whose name is Molly, is very passionate student.

✓ For example, my seminar teacher whose name is Molly, is a very passionate teacher.

The pronoun 'student' is incorrect here because Molly is the teacher, not a student. It should be 'teacher' to match the subject.

× They set you have you have to study because you improve.

✓ She sets tasks so that you have to study because you improve.

The pronoun 'They' is incorrect when referring to a singular teacher named Molly; it should be 'She'. The original sentence is also unclear and ungrammatical; rephrasing to 'She sets tasks so that you have to study because you improve' clarifies the meaning and corrects the grammar.