Rules— Part 1 Report
Conversation
Part 1
Examiner
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Candidate
Yes, there are certain rules in my school for students. First of all, I think that the most important one is to respect each other. Secondly, we have to be punctual and we have to be on time for the lectures. Thirdly, I would say the most one or another significant is to wear.
Examiner
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Candidate
Now, I believe that it's not good to have very many and strict rules. Some rules can help and benefit students to create a nice personality and to respect each other. But if you have many rules, this can lead to aggressive behaviors and not following the rules.
Examiner
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
Candidate
Yes, at the moment I am a student, so my professor of pharmacology is a teacher, a professor that she does her job very good since she is very respectful to all the students and at the same time she tries to teach us all the basics of pharmacology that we will need in our future careers.
Evaluation
Overall
Part 1
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Score: 65.0Suggestion: Προσπάθησε να κάνεις τις απαντήσεις σου πιο φυσικές και ολοκληρωμένες. Χρησιμοποίησε συνδετικές λέξεις για να συνδέσεις τις ιδέες σου και να αποφύγεις την ασάφεια. Επίσης, προσπάθησε να ολοκληρώσεις τις προτάσεις σου και να αποφύγεις την ασάφεια στο τέλος.
Example: Yes, there are several rules at my school. Firstly, respecting each other is very important. Secondly, students must be punctual and arrive on time for lectures. Lastly, we have a dress code that everyone needs to follow to maintain discipline.
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Score: 75.0Suggestion: Χρησιμοποίησε πιο συγκεκριμένες λεπτομέρειες και σύνδεσε τις ιδέες σου με κατάλληλες συνδετικές λέξεις για να κάνεις την απάντησή σου πιο συνεκτική και πειστική.
Example: I believe that having some rules is beneficial because they help students develop good habits and respect. However, too many strict rules might cause frustration and rebellious behavior, which is counterproductive.
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
Score: 70.0Suggestion: Προσπάθησε να κάνεις την απάντησή σου πιο φυσική και να χρησιμοποιήσεις πιο ποικίλο λεξιλόγιο. Επίσης, χρησιμοποίησε συνδετικές λέξεις για να συνδέσεις τις ιδέες σου και να κάνεις την απάντηση πιο ρέουσα.
Example: Yes, I have a professor of pharmacology who does her job very well. She is respectful to all students and makes sure to teach us the fundamental concepts that will be essential for our future careers.
Grammar
× Thirdly, I would say the most one or another significant is to wear.
✓ Thirdly, I would say the most significant one is to wear a uniform.
The phrase 'the most one or another significant' is incorrect and unclear. The correct phrase is 'the most significant one'. Also, the verb 'to wear' needs an object to complete the meaning, such as 'a uniform'. This correction clarifies the sentence and makes it grammatically correct.
× she does her job very good since she is very respectful to all the students
✓ she does her job very well since she is very respectful to all the students
The adverb 'well' should be used instead of the adjective 'good' to modify the verb 'does'. Using 'good' here is grammatically incorrect because 'does' requires an adverb to describe how the action is performed.
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