Rules— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer addresses the question but contains grammatical errors and lacks clarity. To improve, use correct verb forms and articles, and organise your answer more clearly. For example, say 'There are many rules at my school, especially for boys. For instance, boys are not allowed to have long hair, and their shoes must be white.'

Example: There are many rules at my school, especially for boys. For instance, boys are not allowed to have long hair, and their shoes must be white.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but could be clearer and more natural. Use linking words to connect ideas and correct grammar. For example, say 'Yes, I think more rules would help students learn discipline, which is beneficial for their future careers because following rules is important in many areas.'

Example: Yes, I think more rules would help students learn discipline, which is beneficial for their future careers because following rules is important in many areas.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to form complete sentences and clarify your ideas. For example, say 'Yes, I have a teacher who does her job very well. She is my counselling teacher, and she is a good role model who helps students stay disciplined.'

Example: Yes, I have a teacher who does her job very well. She is my counselling teacher, and she is a good role model who helps students stay disciplined.

× Yes of course so many rules at my school specifically for boys for instance like boy cannot has long hair and shoes should white color.

✓ Yes, of course, there are so many rules at my school specifically for boys. For instance, boys cannot have long hair and shoes should be white in colour.

The sentence has singular and plural issues: 'boy' should be plural 'boys' to match the context, and 'cannot has' is incorrect because 'cannot' should be followed by the base form 'have'. Also, 'shoes should white color' lacks the verb 'be' and 'white color' should be 'white in colour' for correct adjective use. The sentence also needs 'there are' to indicate existence of rules.

× Yes of course so many rules at my school specifically for boys for instance like boy cannot has long hair and shoes should white color.

✓ Yes, of course, there are so many rules at my school specifically for boys. For instance, boys cannot have long hair and shoes should be white in colour.

The modal verb 'cannot' must be followed by the base form of the verb, so 'has' is incorrect and should be 'have'. Also, 'should' as a modal verb requires the base form 'be' after it in 'shoes should be white in colour'.

× Yes of course so many rules at my school specifically for boys for instance like boy cannot has long hair and shoes should white color.

✓ Yes, of course, there are so many rules at my school specifically for boys. For instance, boys cannot have long hair and shoes should be white in colour.

The sentence lacks the correct use of 'there are' to indicate the existence of many rules. Without 'there are', the sentence is incomplete and grammatically incorrect.

× Yes, because students can learn how to discipline in the workplace, so it's really beneficial our future to follow the rules in a lot of area.

✓ Yes, because students can learn how to be disciplined in the workplace, so it's really beneficial for our future to follow the rules in a lot of areas.

The phrase 'learn how to discipline' is incorrect because 'discipline' as a verb means to punish or train, but here the intended meaning is to be disciplined (passive). Also, 'in a lot of area' should be plural 'areas'. The verb form 'to be disciplined' is needed instead of 'to discipline'.

× Yes, because students can learn how to discipline in the workplace, so it's really beneficial our future to follow the rules in a lot of area.

✓ Yes, because students can learn how to be disciplined in the workplace, so it's really beneficial for our future to follow the rules in a lot of areas.

The phrase 'beneficial our future' is missing the preposition 'for' to link 'beneficial' and 'our future'. Also, 'in a lot of area' should be 'in a lot of areas' to be grammatically correct.

× Yes I do my teacher. Does her job very well. Is that my counseling teacher? So of course she needs to be figure for student to be disciplined.

✓ Yes, I do. My teacher does her job very well. She is my counselling teacher. So, of course, she needs to be a figure for students to be disciplined.

The original sentences are fragmented and lack proper structure. 'Yes I do my teacher.' is incomplete and should be 'Yes, I do.' The question 'Is that my counseling teacher?' is awkward and should be 'She is my counselling teacher.' Also, 'she needs to be figure for student' is missing the article 'a' and 'student' should be plural 'students'. The corrected sentences are clearer and grammatically correct.