Rules— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn cần sử dụng ngữ pháp chính xác hơn và tránh lỗi sai như 'there are strict attendance policy' nên là 'there is a strict attendance policy'. Ngoài ra, bạn nên sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lặp từ. Hãy cố gắng làm cho câu trả lời tự nhiên và ngắn gọn hơn, không quá dài dòng.

Example: There are several rules at my school. For instance, we must wear uniforms every day to promote equality and discipline. In addition, there is a strict attendance policy to ensure students do not miss important lessons and keep up with their studies.

Suggestion: Bạn nên chú ý đến cấu trúc câu và ngữ pháp để câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn. Ví dụ, câu 'clear regulations have them develop' không chính xác, nên dùng 'help them develop'. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời cần có sự liên kết mạch lạc hơn bằng cách sử dụng từ nối và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp để ý tưởng được truyền đạt hiệu quả.

Example: Yes, I believe students can benefit from having more rules because clear regulations help them develop a sense of responsibility. For example, rules about respecting others and completing homework on time create a professional learning environment where everyone can focus better.

Suggestion: Bạn cần chú ý đến thì động từ và từ vựng phù hợp. Ví dụ, 'who manage' nên là 'who manages', và 'disgruntled' không phù hợp với ngữ cảnh, có thể bạn muốn nói 'disciplined' hoặc 'motivated'. Hãy sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và câu trả lời có cấu trúc rõ ràng hơn để thể hiện ý tốt hơn.

Example: Of course I do. Her name is Miss Lan and she is a highly dedicated teacher who manages the school effectively by organizing activities and supporting both students and staff. She also encourages her students to be respectful and disciplined, which has created a positive and professional learning environment.

× Actually, there are strict attendance policy that all students were to follow to ensure they do not miss important lessons and keep up with their studies.

✓ Actually, there is a strict attendance policy that all students have to follow to ensure they do not miss important lessons and keep up with their studies.

The subject 'policy' is singular, so the verb should be 'is' instead of 'are'. Also, 'policy' needs an article 'a' before it. The phrase 'were to follow' is past tense and does not fit the present context; it should be 'have to follow' to indicate current obligation.

× Yes, I believe students can benefit from having more rules because clear regulations have them develop a sense of responsibility and maintain this equipment in their classroom.

✓ Yes, I believe students can benefit from having more rules because clear regulations help them develop a sense of responsibility and maintain the equipment in their classroom.

The verb 'have' is incorrectly used here; it should be 'help' to correctly express that regulations assist students. Also, 'this equipment' is incorrect because 'equipment' is uncountable and should be preceded by 'the' if specific.

× For example, rules for respecting others and completing homework in our time frame of professional learning environment where everyone can focus better.

✓ For example, rules for respecting others and completing homework within our time frame create a professional learning environment where everyone can focus better.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a main verb. Adding 'create' clarifies the sentence structure and meaning. Also, 'in our time frame of professional learning environment' is awkward; 'within our time frame' is more appropriate.

× Her name is Miss LAN and she is a highly dedicated teacher who manage the school very effectively by organizing activities and supporting both students and staff.

✓ Her name is Miss LAN and she is a highly dedicated teacher who manages the school very effectively by organizing activities and supporting both students and staff.

The relative clause refers to 'teacher' which is singular, so the verb should be 'manages' instead of 'manage' to agree in number.

× She also encouraged her students to be respectful and disgruntled, which has created a positive and professional learning environment.

✓ She also encourages her students to be respectful and diligent, which has created a positive and professional learning environment.

The verb 'encouraged' is in past tense, but the context suggests a current ongoing action, so 'encourages' in present tense is appropriate. Also, 'disgruntled' means unhappy or dissatisfied, which is likely incorrect here; 'diligent' (hardworking) fits better.