Rules— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer needs to be more natural and concise. Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific details using linking words. For example, mention a few key rules and explain why they are important.

Example: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For instance, students must be punctual and arrive by 8 a.m. Additionally, we have to follow a strict dress code to maintain discipline. These rules help create a focused learning environment.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains repetition and grammatical errors. Use linking words to connect ideas and express your opinion clearly. Avoid vague phrases and explain why more rules might help students.

Example: Yes, I believe students would benefit from having more rules because it encourages respect and discipline. For example, clear guidelines help students understand expectations, which improves their behavior and academic performance.

Suggestion: Your answer is fragmented and difficult to follow. Use complete sentences and linking words to make your answer coherent. Clearly describe the teacher's qualities and give specific examples of how they help students.

Example: Yes, my maths teacher is very dedicated. If a student does not understand a problem, he patiently explains it again until the student fully understands. This shows his commitment to helping students succeed.

× Yeah, there are rules for every students in every school.

✓ Yeah, there are rules for every student in every school.

The word 'every' is followed by a singular noun, so 'students' should be singular 'student'.

× I guess 13 school, 13 schools have rules like that.

✓ I guess 13 schools have rules like that.

The noun 'school' should be plural 'schools' when referring to more than one school.

× Yeah, I think the statement is correct that students would benefit more from more rules, because if there will be more rules, students will be more respect, more respect, more respective, and they will follow the rules and they will follow the guidelines which schools are providing them.

✓ Yeah, I think the statement is correct that students would benefit more from more rules, because if there are more rules, students will be more respectful, and they will follow the rules and the guidelines which schools provide them.

The phrase 'if there will be' is incorrect; use 'if there are' for present/future conditional. 'More respect' is a noun phrase; the adjective 'respectful' is needed to describe students. Also, 'more respective' is incorrect; 'respectful' is the correct adjective. 'Providing them' is better as 'provide them' for clarity.

× Yeah, in my school there is a teacher who does this job very well like my maths teacher.

✓ Yeah, in my school there is a teacher who does his job very well, like my maths teacher.

The phrase 'does this job' should be 'does his job' to refer correctly to the teacher's job.

× If a student is not understanding any of his problem if he has some concern.

✓ If a student does not understand any of his problems or has some concern.

The phrase 'is not understanding' is incorrect; use simple present 'does not understand'. 'Any of his problem' should be plural 'problems'. The sentence structure is incomplete and needs correction.

× So if the teacher has already explained the question.

✓ If the teacher has already explained the question,

This is a sentence fragment; it needs to be connected to the next clause to form a complete sentence.

× So if a student is not and if student has not understand that so he will try to explain him again and again till he is not.

✓ So if a student does not understand, the teacher will try to explain it again and again until he understands.

The sentence is incomplete and ungrammatical. 'Student has not understand' should be 'student does not understand'. 'Explain him' is incorrect; it should be 'explain it'. 'Till he is not' is incomplete; it should be 'until he understands'.