Rules— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: In your answer, try to be more concise and avoid repeating the word "inappropriate". Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, you can say "There are many rules at my school, especially for girls. One important rule is not to wear shorts or inappropriate clothing because it can distract other students and teachers. This is considered disrespectful, especially in a learning environment."

Example: There are many rules at my school, especially for girls. One important rule is not to wear shorts or inappropriate clothing because it can distract other students and teachers. This is considered disrespectful, especially in a learning environment.

Suggestion: Your answer is clear but can be improved by avoiding redundancy and using linking words. Also, try to use more precise vocabulary. For example, instead of "rules are very important, it is meant to be followed," you can say "rules are essential because they guide our behavior."

Example: In my opinion, students would benefit from having more rules because rules are essential as they guide our behavior. They teach us important values and help us become responsible citizens and good students.

Suggestion: Your answer is a bit unclear and has grammatical errors. Try to organize your ideas better and use linking words. Also, avoid vague phrases like "do any this." For example, you can say "Yes, many teachers at my private school do their jobs well because they are well trained and follow school rules strictly. They also ensure that students behave properly."

Example: Yes, many teachers at my private school do their jobs well because they are well trained and follow school rules strictly. They also ensure that students behave properly in class.

× The rules that are very important is to not wear shorts or wear something inappropriate around the area because it is very inappropriate for other students and also teachers as well.

✓ The rules that are very important are to not wear shorts or wear something inappropriate around the area because it is very inappropriate for other students and also teachers as well.

The subject 'rules' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is' to agree in number. This is a singular and plural issue.

× And rules just teach us a lot of basic things that we have to know and we have to follow in order to be a perfect citizen or a perfect student in class.

✓ And rules just teach us a lot of basic things that we need to know and follow in order to be a perfect citizen or a perfect student in class.

Using 'have to' repeatedly is correct but can be improved by using 'need to' for variety and clarity. This relates to modal verb usage.

× Yes, it is very common to see a teacher who does jobs well in my school because my school is a private school and teachers they have to be well trained to be teaching and they also have to respect the rules that are taught and every students that he saw, he must not allow them to do any this.

✓ Yes, it is very common to see teachers who do their jobs well in my school because my school is a private school and teachers have to be well trained to teach and they also have to respect the rules that are taught. For every student that they see, they must not allow them to do anything inappropriate.

There are several pronoun errors: 'teachers they' is redundant, 'every students' should be 'every student' (singular), 'he saw' should be 'they see' to match plural 'teachers', and 'any this' is incorrect, should be 'anything inappropriate'. These are incorrect use of pronouns and singular/plural issues.