Rules— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, ví dụ như 'my goods' thay vì 'my school' và lặp từ 'several several'. Bạn nên sử dụng câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn và tránh lỗi lặp từ, đồng thời trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với cấu trúc rõ ràng.

Example: Yes, my school has several rules. For example, students must wear uniforms when they come to school.

Suggestion: Bạn đã trả lời khá tốt với ví dụ cụ thể, nhưng có lỗi chính tả 'roots' thay vì 'rules' và câu trả lời có thể được làm mạch lạc hơn bằng cách sử dụng liên từ để kết nối các ý. Hãy chú ý chính tả và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời trôi chảy hơn.

Example: Actually, I think students would benefit from having more rules because clear guidelines help them stay focused on their studies. For instance, rules about attendance and homework encourage students to be more responsible.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời có lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, ví dụ 'dare herself' nên là 'does her job'. Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng và thêm liên từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên và rõ ràng hơn.

Example: Definitely. I have a teacher who does her job exceptionally well. She helped me enroll in my language course and has provided continuous support throughout my studies.

× Yes, my goods had several several rules, especially the students have to wear uniform when they go to school.

✓ Yes, my school has several rules, especially that students have to wear uniforms when they go to school.

The word 'goods' is incorrect here; it should be 'school' to refer to the place. 'Had' should be 'has' to match the present tense. 'Several several' is a repetition error. 'Uniform' should be plural 'uniforms' because it refers to the clothing worn by multiple students.

× Actually, I think students would benefit from having more roots because clear guidelines help them stay focused on their study.

✓ Actually, I think students would benefit from having more rules because clear guidelines help them stay focused on their studies.

The word 'roots' is a typo and should be 'rules'. Also, 'study' should be plural 'studies' to refer to the general academic work of students.

× She helped me enrol in my language course and provide continuous support throughout my study.

✓ She helped me enrol in my language course and provided continuous support throughout my studies.

The verb 'provide' should be in past tense 'provided' to match 'helped'. Also, 'study' should be plural 'studies' to refer to academic work in general.

× I have a teacher who dare herself exceptionally well.

✓ I have a teacher who carries herself exceptionally well.

The verb 'dare' is incorrect here; the correct phrase is 'carries herself' to mean how she behaves or conducts herself. 'Herself' is correctly used as a reflexive pronoun.