Rules— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat unclear and incomplete, especially the second rule. Try to give a clear and complete response with specific details, and avoid grammatical errors. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Example: Yes, there are several rules at my school. First, we must wear our school uniform every day. In addition, students are not allowed to dye their hair or wear makeup. These rules help maintain discipline and a good learning environment.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to express your opinion clearly with supporting reasons and use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Example: Yes, I think students would benefit from having more rules. For example, learning to follow rules at school can help students develop responsibility, which will make it easier for them to adapt to rules in companies or universities later.

Suggestion: Your answer is incomplete and has grammatical errors. Provide a complete and clear description with specific details, and use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Example: Yes, I have a teacher who does her job very well. She prepares all her classes by herself and always smiles, which creates a positive atmosphere. Moreover, she tries to help students understand difficult topics clearly.

× First of all, we have we should wear our school uniform when we go to school every day.

✓ First of all, we should wear our school uniform when we go to school every day.

The phrase 'we have we should' is incorrect and redundant. The modal verb 'should' is sufficient to express obligation. Remove 'we have' to correct the sentence.

× Second, we are not allowed to die hair or.

✓ Second, we are not allowed to dye hair or.

The verb 'die' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'dye' when referring to coloring hair. Also, the sentence is incomplete; it should be completed for clarity, but based on the transcript, only 'die' is corrected to 'dye'.

× Yes I do if students would take a roles in school and that will be more easier in company or in university to take a roles.

✓ Yes, I do. If students take roles in school, it will be easier in company or university to take roles.

The modal verb 'would' is incorrectly used in the conditional clause; the simple present 'take' should be used for real conditionals. Also, 'a roles' is incorrect; 'roles' is plural and does not need 'a'. 'More easier' is incorrect; 'easier' alone is correct.

× Yes I do if students would take a roles in school and that will be more easier in company or in university to take a roles.

✓ Yes, I do. If students take roles in school, it will be easier in company or university to take roles.

'Roles' is plural, so 'a roles' is incorrect. Remove 'a' before 'roles' to correct the plural usage.

× Yes, I met a teacher who did her job very well.

✓ Yes, I have met a teacher who does her job very well.

The question is about a current teacher, so present perfect 'have met' and present tense 'does' are more appropriate to indicate ongoing relevance.

× She was preparing all classes by herself and she always smiling and trying to be.

✓ She prepared all classes by herself and she was always smiling and trying to be.

The verb 'smiling' needs an auxiliary verb 'was' to form the past continuous tense. Also, 'was preparing' and 'was always smiling' should be consistent in tense; here, 'prepared' is better for completed action, and 'was always smiling' for ongoing action in the past.