Rules— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer needs to be more structured and clear. Start with a direct response, then add specific details using linking words. Avoid redundancy and grammatical errors. For example, mention the rules clearly and explain why they exist.

Example: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For instance, students must wear a uniform and arrive on time before morning prayers. These rules help maintain discipline and unity among students.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Please express your opinion clearly and support it with reasons. Use linking words to connect ideas logically and avoid vague phrases.

Example: Yes, I believe students would benefit from more rules because rules help maintain order and discipline. For example, restricting certain activities can keep students focused on their studies and improve their moral values.

Suggestion: Your answer should be clearer and more coherent. Start with a direct statement, then explain why the teacher is good using specific examples. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Example: Yes, I had a computer science teacher who was excellent. He taught us in a very effective way and helped us improve our skills, which made learning enjoyable and easy to understand.

× Of course there are many rules in our schools and I was in my school.

✓ Of course there are many rules in our school and I was in my school.

The word 'schools' should be singular 'school' to match the context, as the student refers to their own school, not multiple schools.

× So the rules are we wore a uniform that is strictly role and we need to go on time before our prayer.

✓ So the rules are we wear a uniform that is strictly enforced and we need to arrive on time before our prayer.

The phrase 'strictly role' is incorrect; it should be 'strictly enforced' to describe the rule. Also, 'wore' is past tense but the rules are general, so 'wear' is correct. 'Go on time' is better expressed as 'arrive on time'.

× Of course, because I think it's a mandatory to have a rules in school or colleges or any city because it's it's not our so we need to prohibit any extracurricular.

✓ Of course, because I think it's mandatory to have rules in schools or colleges or any city because it's not ours, so we need to prohibit any extracurricular activities.

The article 'a' before 'mandatory' is incorrect; 'mandatory' is an adjective and does not need 'a'. 'A rules' is incorrect; 'rules' is plural and should not have 'a'. 'Extracurricular' should be 'extracurricular activities' for clarity.

× So yeah, I think that's a very benefit beneficial for morals office student.

✓ So yeah, I think that's very beneficial for the morals of students.

The phrase 'a very benefit beneficial' is incorrect; 'beneficial' is the correct adjective. 'Morals office student' is unclear and likely meant to be 'morals of students'.

× Yes, I had a teacher of eight days to make computer science in our school.

✓ Yes, I had a teacher for eight days to teach computer science in our school.

The phrase 'of eight days to make computer science' is incorrect. It should be 'for eight days to teach computer science' to correctly express the duration and action.

× He was a very perfect and good teacher because he the way he learned, the way he improvised their skills, to us, that was absolutely stunning.

✓ He was a very good teacher because the way he taught and improved our skills was absolutely stunning.

'Very perfect' is incorrect; 'perfect' is absolute and does not need 'very'. 'He learned' should be 'he taught'. 'Improvised their skills to us' is incorrect; it should be 'improved our skills'.