Rules— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Jawaban Anda kurang terstruktur dan ada pengulangan kata seperti 'such as such as'. Gunakan kalimat yang lebih jelas dan singkat, serta hindari pengulangan. Misalnya, sebutkan beberapa aturan secara spesifik dan gunakan kalimat yang efektif.

Example: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For example, students must wear uniforms and arrive on time. There are also rules about respecting teachers and keeping the school clean.

Suggestion: Jawaban Anda kurang jelas dan ada kesalahan tata bahasa yang mengganggu pemahaman. Gunakan kalimat yang lebih terstruktur dan jelaskan alasan Anda dengan lebih spesifik serta gunakan linking words untuk menghubungkan ide.

Example: I don't think more rules would help. Many students tend to ignore rules and behave badly. However, some rules like arriving on time and respecting teachers are important and beneficial.

Suggestion: Jawaban Anda mengandung kesalahan kata dan tata bahasa yang membuat makna tidak jelas, seperti 'I have a picture' dan 'he always stitch improperly'. Perbaiki penggunaan kata dan buat kalimat yang jelas serta relevan dengan pertanyaan.

Example: Yes, I have a teacher named Mr. Pajamas who does his job very well. He is very kind and always follows the rules. He explains lessons clearly, so students can understand him easily.

× Yes, of course in my school there's a lot of rules that student have to work with them such as such as uniform and not too late to go to school and many more.

✓ Yes, of course in my school there are a lot of rules that students have to follow, such as wearing uniforms, not being late to school, and many more.

The phrase 'there's a lot of rules' is incorrect because 'rules' is plural, so it should be 'there are'. Also, 'student' should be plural 'students' to agree with 'rules'. The phrase 'work with them' is awkward; 'follow' is more appropriate. 'Not too late to go to school' is corrected to 'not being late to school' for clarity.

× A lot of scholars students just make students they don't follow the rules and became naughty.

✓ A lot of students just ignore the rules and become naughty.

The phrase 'scholars students' is redundant and incorrect; 'students' alone is sufficient. 'Make students' is unclear; 'ignore the rules' is clearer. 'Became' should be 'become' to match present tense. This corrects plural and tense issues.

× And some rules it doesn't make sense in my school.

✓ And some rules don't make sense in my school.

The pronoun 'it' is unnecessary and incorrect here because 'rules' is plural. The verb should agree with the plural subject 'rules', so 'doesn't' changes to 'don't'.

× But for some rules such arriving time or respect the teacher is good.

✓ But some rules, such as arriving on time or respecting the teacher, are good.

The phrase 'such arriving time or respect the teacher' is incorrect. It should be 'such as arriving on time or respecting the teacher'. Also, 'is' changes to 'are' to agree with the plural subject 'rules'.

× Yes I do. I have a picture and his name is Pajamas and he's really kind.

✓ Yes, I do. I have a teacher and his name is Pajamas, and he's really kind.

'I have a picture' is incorrect in context; it should be 'I have a teacher'. This corrects the pronoun and meaning.

× He always follow the rules.

✓ He always follows the rules.

The verb 'follow' should be in third person singular form 'follows' to agree with the subject 'He'.

× He always stitch improperly and make students can understand what he tell to us.

✓ He always teaches properly and makes students understand what he tells us.

'Stitch improperly' is incorrect; likely intended 'teach properly'. 'Make students can understand' is incorrect; should be 'makes students understand'. 'He tell to us' should be 'he tells us'. These correct verb forms and usage.