Rules— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi trước, sau đó mới đưa ra ví dụ cụ thể. Ngoài ra, cần chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

Example: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For example, all students must wear a uniform, and if they don't, they will face punishment.

Suggestion: Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy trình bày ý kiến của bạn một cách mạch lạc và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời có tính logic hơn.

Example: Yes, I believe having more rules helps students become more responsible. For instance, when I was younger, I sometimes forgot to do my homework, but now I always finish it before playing games.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng và chính xác hơn. Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng ngữ pháp và từ vựng phù hợp để diễn đạt ý tưởng. Hãy đưa ra ví dụ cụ thể và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc.

Example: Yes, I have many good teachers. For example, when I didn't understand a lesson, they always took time to explain it until I understood.

× Where I was saying that all school have great places for their students.

✓ Where I was saying that all schools have great places for their students.

The noun 'school' should be plural 'schools' because it refers to all schools in general, not just one. In English, when talking about multiple entities, the plural form is required.

× For instance in my school all students must wear uniform.

✓ For instance, in my school all students must wear uniforms.

The noun 'uniform' should be plural 'uniforms' because it refers to the clothing items worn by multiple students. When referring to multiple items, the plural form is necessary.

× If they don't do that they will have a punishment.

✓ If they don't do that, they will be punished.

The phrase 'have a punishment' is unnatural. The correct modal verb usage is 'will be punished' to indicate a consequence. Also, a comma is needed after the conditional clause.

× Yes, I think more and more tools will have students become a person who have responsibility for each thing.

✓ Yes, I think more and more rules will help students become people who have responsibility for everything.

The word 'tools' is incorrect here; 'rules' fits the context better. 'Students' is plural, so 'people' should be plural instead of 'a person'. Also, 'have responsibility' should be 'have responsibility' but 'for each thing' is better expressed as 'for everything'. The verb 'will have students become' is awkward; 'will help students become' is more natural.

× When I was a kid and it is like doing my homework, but now I always complete my homework before going out of playing games.

✓ When I was a kid, I didn't like doing my homework, but now I always complete my homework before going out to play games.

The phrase 'it is like doing my homework' is incorrect; it should be 'I didn't like doing my homework' to express past dislike. Also, 'going out of playing games' is incorrect; it should be 'going out to play games'. The sentence needs a comma after 'When I was a kid' for clarity.

× Well all teachers who I meet do to well because they are responsible for this student.

✓ Well, all teachers whom I meet do well because they are responsible for their students.

The phrase 'do to well' is incorrect; it should be 'do well'. 'Who I meet' should be 'whom I meet' as the object of the verb. 'This student' should be 'their students' to match plural teachers and plural students. A comma is needed after 'Well'.

× For instance, when I didn't understand this lesson, they always have me to understand them.

✓ For instance, when I didn't understand a lesson, they always helped me to understand it.

The phrase 'they always have me to understand them' is incorrect. The past tense 'helped' fits better with 'didn't understand'. Also, 'this lesson' should be 'a lesson' for generality, and 'them' should be 'it' referring to the lesson. The verb 'have' is incorrect here; 'helped' is appropriate.