Rules— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 你的回答有點不自然，語法錯誤較多，且表達不夠清楚。建議你在回答時，先直接回答問題，再用一兩句話具體說明原因或感受，並注意主詞和動詞的一致性。

Example: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For example, attendance is strictly required because the school believes it helps students learn better.

Suggestion: 你的回答有些語法錯誤，且表達不夠流暢。建議你使用連接詞使句子更連貫，並注意動詞時態和用法，讓回答更自然且有說服力。

Example: No, I don't think more rules would help. I believe that when students learn to control themselves, they actually gain more freedom, so self-discipline is more important than strict rules.

Suggestion: 你的回答結構不清楚，且有語法錯誤。建議你先直接回答問題，然後用具體例子說明老師的優點，並使用連接詞使句子更流暢。

Example: Yes, I have a professor who manages her work and life very well. For instance, when she is on vacation, she completely disconnects from work, which shows she values a good work-life balance.

× Yes, I think most of school would require people to attend regularly while others are not.

✓ Yes, I think most of the schools would require people to attend regularly while others do not.

The phrase 'most of school' is incorrect because 'school' is singular and uncountable here, but the context implies multiple schools, so it should be 'most of the schools'. Also, 'others are not' is awkward; it should be 'others do not' to correctly refer to other schools not requiring attendance.

× But our school are really emphasized on it and I think which is a little bit unfair because since we are university students, we might have freedom of truth.

✓ But our school really emphasizes it and I think that is a little bit unfair because since we are university students, we might have freedom of choice.

The subject 'our school' is singular, so the verb should be 'emphasizes' not 'are emphasized'. Also, 'emphasized on' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'emphasizes it'. The phrase 'freedom of truth' is likely a mistake; 'freedom of choice' or 'freedom of thought' fits better in this context.

× No, certainly, because I believe in the more you control yourself, the more freedom you are.

✓ No, certainly, because I believe the more you control yourself, the more freedom you have.

The phrase 'the more freedom you are' is incorrect; 'freedom' is a noun and requires the verb 'have' to indicate possession. Also, 'in the more you control yourself' is awkward; it should be 'the more you control yourself' without 'in'.

× So I think the most important thing is to help people or help students got the ability to regular themselves rather than use rules to restrict them.

✓ So I think the most important thing is to help people or help students get the ability to regulate themselves rather than use rules to restrict them.

The verb 'got' is past tense and incorrect here; it should be the base form 'get' after 'help'. Also, 'regular themselves' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'regulate themselves' meaning to control or manage themselves.

× And yes, I knew a professor of mine, one of mine, she is a really talented professor who is very good at working life balance.

✓ And yes, I know a professor of mine, she is a really talented professor who is very good at work-life balance.

The verb 'knew' is past tense, but the context suggests the professor is still known, so 'know' (present tense) is correct. Also, 'working life balance' is incorrect; the correct term is 'work-life balance'.

× Because every time she on vacation, we couldn't find her and it's really like completely disappear.

✓ Because every time she is on vacation, we can't find her and it's like she completely disappears.

The sentence lacks the verb 'is' after 'she'. Also, 'it's really like completely disappear' is ungrammatical; it should be 'it's like she completely disappears' to correctly express the idea.