Rules— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it is a bit long and slightly repetitive. Try to be more concise and use linking words to improve coherence. Also, include more specific examples to enrich your response.

Example: Yes, there are several rules at my school to ensure discipline and respect among students. For instance, we must wear uniforms every day, which helps maintain the school's dignity and unity.

Suggestion: Your answer addresses the question but could be clearer and more natural. Avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and provide more specific reasons or examples.

Example: Yes, I think having more rules can help students become more organised and focused. For example, rules about using phones in class reduce distractions, allowing students to concentrate better on their studies.

Suggestion: Your answer is incomplete and unclear, which affects coherence and effectiveness. Try to give a direct response with a clear topic sentence, followed by specific supporting details. Avoid hesitations and incomplete sentences.

Example: Yes, I had a university professor who was excellent at his job. Not only was he knowledgeable, but he also encouraged students to participate actively, which made learning enjoyable and effective.

× Yes, I believe students life will only become organized and they will become more self focused and goal oriented when they are put into certain rules that they need to follow.

✓ Yes, I believe students' lives will only become organized and they will become more self-focused and goal-oriented when they are put into certain rules that they need to follow.

The phrase 'students life' is incorrect because 'students' is plural and 'life' is singular. The correct plural possessive form is 'students' lives' to indicate the lives belonging to multiple students. Also, 'self focused' and 'goal oriented' should be hyphenated as compound adjectives before nouns.

× During my school life, I had I think there are a lot of teachers that have been doing their jobs really well.

✓ During my school life, I think there were a lot of teachers who did their jobs really well.

The original sentence mixes tenses and has redundant words. 'I had I think' is incorrect and should be simplified to 'I think'. Since the time frame is in the past ('During my school life'), the verbs should be in the past tense: 'were' instead of 'are' and 'did' instead of 'have been doing'.

× But here I would like to talk. But one teacher that I can think of is was my assistant was a professor in my university.

✓ But here I would like to talk about one teacher that I can think of, who was my assistant and a professor at my university.

The original sentence is fragmented and confusing with repeated words ('is was my assistant was'). It needs restructuring for clarity and grammatical correctness. Adding 'about' after 'talk' and combining the clauses properly improves sentence flow and meaning.