Part 1
Examiner
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Candidate
Yes, we have some rules at my school. I'm a university student and in my university we have to go to university at correct time to take the morning lessons.
Examiner
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Candidate
No, I don't. I think university students should be free. For example, at in our free time we should study our own research or do our own hobbies.
Examiner
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
Candidate
Yes I do in my faculty. Some of my teacher do job very well. For example she often goes to outdoor field studies for her research.
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Score: 70.0Suggestion: 回答は質問に直接答えていますが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現があります。例えば、「go to university at correct time」は「arrive at university on time」の方が自然です。また、詳細をもう少し具体的に述べると良いでしょう。
Example: Yes, there are several rules at my university. For instance, students must arrive on time for morning lectures to avoid missing important information. This helps maintain discipline and ensures everyone benefits from the lessons.
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Score: 65.0Suggestion: 回答は簡潔ですが、文法ミスや不自然な表現があります。例えば、「at in our free time」は誤りで、「in our free time」が正しいです。また、理由や意見をもう少し詳しく述べて、回答を豊かにしましょう。
Example: No, I don't think more rules would help. University students need freedom to manage their own time, so they can focus on personal research or hobbies during their free time, which promotes creativity and self-discipline.
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
Score: 60.0Suggestion: 回答に文法の誤りが多く、表現も不自然です。例えば、「Some of my teacher do job very well」は「Some of my teachers do their job very well」が正しいです。また、具体的な説明を加えて、回答をより明確にしましょう。
Example: Yes, I have a teacher in my faculty who performs her job excellently. For example, she frequently conducts outdoor field studies as part of her research, which inspires students to engage more deeply with the subject.
× I'm a university student and in my university we have to go to university at correct time to take the morning lessons.
✓ I'm a university student and in my university we have to go to university at the correct time to take the morning lessons.
The phrase 'at correct time' is missing the definite article 'the' before 'correct time'. In English, when referring to a specific time, the definite article 'the' is required. Therefore, it should be 'at the correct time'.
× For example, at in our free time we should study our own research or do our own hobbies.
✓ For example, in our free time we should study our own research or do our own hobbies.
The phrase 'at in our free time' contains redundant prepositions 'at' and 'in'. The correct preposition to use here is 'in' when referring to free time. Therefore, 'at' should be removed.
× Some of my teacher do job very well.
✓ Some of my teachers do their job very well.
The word 'teacher' should be plural 'teachers' because 'some of' refers to more than one person. Also, 'do job' is missing the possessive pronoun 'their' before 'job' to indicate ownership. Therefore, it should be 'Some of my teachers do their job very well.'
× For example she often goes to outdoor field studies for her research.
✓ For example, she often goes to outdoor field studies for her research.
A comma is needed after 'For example' to separate the introductory phrase from the main sentence. This is a punctuation correction rather than a preposition error, but it improves sentence clarity.