Rules— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên tránh lặp từ và sử dụng cấu trúc câu hoàn chỉnh để truyền đạt ý tưởng một cách tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

Example: Yes, there are several rules at my school. I believe these rules are necessary to help students follow regulations and maintain discipline.

Suggestion: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh. Hãy tránh ngắt quãng và sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy giải thích rõ hơn lý do tại sao bạn nghĩ như vậy.

Example: No, I don't think more rules would benefit students. From a student's perspective, too many rules can feel restrictive and prevent them from managing their own activities.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn chưa hoàn chỉnh và thiếu chi tiết cụ thể. Bạn nên hoàn thành câu trả lời, sử dụng câu đầy đủ và cung cấp ví dụ hoặc lý do để làm rõ quan điểm của mình.

Example: Yes, I have a teacher who does her job very well. She not only gives us valuable advice but also supports us whenever we face difficulties in our studies.

× Well, definitely there are some rules for student believe that school need rules to make students stick to stick to regulation.

✓ Well, definitely there are some rules for students. I believe that the school needs rules to make students stick to regulations.

The word 'student' should be plural 'students' because it refers to more than one student. 'School' needs the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific school. 'Need' should be 'needs' to agree with the singular subject 'school'. 'Regulation' should be plural 'regulations' because it refers to multiple rules. Suggestions: Use plural forms when referring to multiple entities and ensure subject-verb agreement.

× Well, I well, I don't think so, because in student point of view they receive, they perceive rules as something that. Ban them from doing their business.

✓ Well, I don't think so, because from a student's point of view, they perceive rules as something that bans them from doing their business.

The phrase 'in student point of view' should be 'from a student's point of view' to correctly express perspective. The verb 'ban' should be 'bans' to agree with the singular subject 'something'. Suggestions: Use correct prepositional phrases to express viewpoints and ensure subject-verb agreement with modal verbs.

× Well yes definitely they are all one teacher that I believe that she's has done her job very well during our semesters.

✓ Well yes, definitely there is one teacher that I believe has done her job very well during our semesters.

The phrase 'they are all one teacher' is incorrect; it should be 'there is one teacher' to indicate a single person. 'She's has' is redundant; it should be 'has'. Suggestions: Use 'there is' for singular existence and avoid redundant auxiliary verbs.

× Well, she not only give us advices but also.

✓ Well, she not only gives us advice but also...

The verb 'give' should be 'gives' to agree with the singular subject 'she'. 'Advices' is incorrect; 'advice' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized. The sentence is incomplete but corrected up to the given part. Suggestions: Use correct verb forms for third person singular and use uncountable nouns properly.