Shoes— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Reduce hesitations and repetitions; give a clear topic sentence then one or two specific reasons with linking words. Correct grammar (e.g., 'I buy shoes twice a year because high-quality shoes are expensive, so I wait for sales or special occasions'). Keep it within 2–4 sentences.

Example: Yes, I like buying shoes. I usually buy shoes twice a year because high-quality pairs are expensive, so I wait for sales or special occasions to get a good deal.

Suggestion: Avoid filler words and use past simple for completed actions. State the action clearly, give one or two concise reasons with linking words, and correct comparative phrasing (use 'cheaper' not 'very cheaper').

Example: Yes, I bought shoes online last month from the Misho app because the prices are cheaper than in stores, so I chose to order there to save money.

Suggestion: Be specific with currency and cleaner phrasing. Use one topic sentence stating typical spending, then give specific reasons with linking words. Avoid unclear phrases like 'affordable duration' and 'easy to materialize'.

Example: I usually spend under 1000 rupees on shoes because I prefer affordable and durable options. Also, I mostly buy black shoes since they match many outfits and are easier to maintain.

Suggestion: This answer is clear but reduce fillers and tighten structure: a direct topic sentence, reason with linking words, and a brief exception. You could add a specific example of when you choose fashionable shoes to make it more vivid.

Example: I prefer comfortable shoes because I walk to work every day and need support. However, for special occasions or nights out, I choose fashionable shoes to look smart, such as wearing leather brogues to a wedding.

× Yes, I really like buying buying shoes uh, mostly I buy shoes uh, twice, uh twice a year, because shoes are very expensive of good quality and so I I wait for sale or any special occasion to buying it I.

✓ Yes, I really like buying shoes. Mostly I buy shoes twice a year because good-quality shoes are very expensive, so I wait for sales or special occasions to buy them.

Errors identified: repeated word 'buying', incorrect preposition/infinitive 'to buying', article and noun order 'expensive of good quality', unnecessary filler words and broken sentence structure. Correction uses the gerund 'buying' correctly without repetition, changes 'to buying' to the infinitive 'to buy', reorders 'good-quality shoes' for correct adjective-noun order, uses plural 'sales' and 'them' to refer back to 'shoes'. Suggestion: avoid filler words, keep one verb form (gerund or infinitive) correctly, and maintain clear sentence structure. Grammar problem type ID:8

× Last month I have, uh, bought, uh, shoes online from Misho app uh, uh, because, uh, in this app, uh, things are very cheaper than the market, so I buy a that's why I buy shoes online and uh, because, uh, I need the shoes.

✓ Last month I bought shoes online from the Misho app because items in that app are cheaper than in the market, so I buy shoes online when I need them.

Error: incorrect use of present perfect 'have bought' with a specific past time expression 'Last month' — simple past 'bought' is required (Past tense issue). Also 'very cheaper' is incorrect (comparative form), and 'the Misho app' needs the definite article and cleaner phrasing. 'I buy a that's why I buy' is fragmented; corrected to a clear reason clause. Suggestion: use simple past with specific past time, use comparative 'cheaper', include appropriate articles, and structure cause-effect sentences clearly. Grammar problem type ID:5

× I usually spend under 1000 on shoes because I prefer affordable duration options, durable options.

✓ I usually spend under 1000 on shoes because I prefer affordable and durable options.

Error: awkward phrase 'affordable duration options' uses incorrect word choice and possibly wrong preposition; repetition of 'options' is unnecessary. Corrected to 'affordable and durable options' which properly links adjectives to the noun. Suggestion: use appropriate adjectives for the noun and combine adjectives with 'and' instead of repeating the noun. Grammar problem type ID:11

× I mostly buy black shoes because since it was matched to my dress and it's easy to materialize.

✓ I mostly buy black shoes because they match my clothes and are easy to coordinate.

Errors: 'since it was matched to my dress' mixes tense and subject — 'it' is unclear and 'was matched' is passive past when general present is needed (Present tense issue). 'Easy to materialize' is incorrect word choice. Correction uses plural pronoun 'they' to refer to 'black shoes', present simple 'match', and replaces 'materialize' with 'coordinate'. Suggestion: ensure pronouns agree with their antecedents, use present tense for habitual facts, and choose correct verbs for intended meaning. Grammar problem type ID:12

× Mostly I prefer comfortable shoes, uh, because, uh, everyday, uh, I have to go for work and I have to wear comfortable shoes.

✓ I mostly prefer comfortable shoes because every day I have to go to work and wear comfortable shoes.

Errors: 'everyday' as an adjective should be 'every day' to mean each day (word choice), and 'go for work' is incorrect preposition usage — correct is 'go to work' (preposition error). Repetition of 'I have to' is reduced for concision. Suggestion: use 'every day' for frequency expressions, 'go to work' for the action, and avoid unnecessary repetition. Grammar problem type ID:11

× Uh, but sometimes whenever I go for outside hangout for some occasion, I prefer fashionable shoes.

✓ But sometimes, when I go out for a hangout or a special occasion, I prefer fashionable shoes.

Errors: 'go for outside hangout' has incorrect word order and prepositions — correct phrase is 'go out for a hangout' or 'go out'. 'For some occasion' is better as 'for a special occasion'. Tense is acceptable but word order and preposition use were incorrect. Suggestion: use 'go out' for leaving home, 'for a hangout' or 'for a special occasion' for clarity, and remove filler words. Grammar problem type ID:11