Shoes— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be concise and coherent: start with a clear topic sentence stating whether you like buying shoes, then give a realistic frequency with one supporting reason. Avoid contradictory statements and grammar errors. Use linking words like "usually" or "however" only when needed.

Example: Yes, I enjoy buying shoes. I usually buy one pair every two or three months because I prioritize comfort and like to replace worn-out footwear regularly.

Suggestion: Keep it natural and focused: answer directly, give a brief past experience and a clear consequence. Remove filler words and correct sentence structure. Use linking words like "so" or "therefore" succinctly.

Example: Yes, I have. For example, I bought a comfortable and stylish pair from Myntra last year, so now I prefer shopping for shoes online because it is convenient and offers many options.

Suggestion: Provide a clear realistic amount and avoid confusing or incorrect phrases. Begin with a direct statement about your typical spend, then explain your choice (quality vs brand) with one linking phrase like "because".

Example: I usually spend around $50 to $80 on a pair of shoes because I prefer good quality and comfort rather than expensive designer brands.

Suggestion: Answer with a clear topic sentence that sums up your preference, then give two specific contrasting reasons using linking words like "however" or "but". Avoid unclear ending phrases and correct small grammar errors.

Example: I generally prefer comfortable shoes for work because I stand all day and need good support; however, for special occasions like weddings or parties, I choose fashionable shoes to match my outfit.

× I always buy a pair in a month whenever I get a chance to get a comfortable shoes.

✓ I always buy a pair each month whenever I get a chance to get comfortable shoes.

'a pair' is singular and 'shoes' is plural; remove the article before 'comfortable shoes' so it matches plural noun usage. Also 'in a month' is better as 'each month' for habitual action. Suggestion: say 'a pair each month' and 'comfortable shoes' without 'a'.

× I didn't miss the chance to buy.

✓ I didn't miss the chance to buy them.

The original sentence is grammatically possible but sounds incomplete because the object is missing; adding 'them' (referring to shoes) clarifies the past action. Maintain past tense consistency.

× As a matter of fact I ending up buying a pair of shoes in a year.

✓ As a matter of fact I end up buying a pair of shoes each year.

'ending' is incorrect form; use simple present 'end up' for habitual action. 'in a year' should be 'each year' for regular frequency. Also keep verb form consistent with present tense description.

× Yes, this is an era of advancement and online shopping is very trending.

✓ Yes, this is an era of advancement and online shopping is very popular.

'trending' is a present participle used incorrectly; 'popular' is the correct adjective to describe online shopping. Use adjectives rather than progressive verbs for general statements.

× I also tried uh once I bought shoes from Myntra and which are quite comfortable and stylish.

✓ I also tried it once: I bought shoes from Myntra which were quite comfortable and stylish.

Sentence is run-on and uses 'which' incorrectly. Break into two clauses, use a pronoun 'it' for 'online shopping' or remove 'tried', and use past tense 'were' to match 'bought'. Remove filler 'uh' in formal answer.

× So as a result, I will feel that I will go further for online shopping.

✓ So as a result, I feel that I will continue to shop online.

'will feel that I will go further for online shopping' is awkward and redundant with double 'will'. Use present 'feel' with future intention 'will continue to shop online' for clarity and naturalness.

× Actually I'm earning A proxy 20 to 30 K per minute and according to me that is very low for buying a branded shoes.

✓ Actually I earn approximately 20 to 30 K per month and, in my opinion, that is very low for buying branded shoes.

'A proxy' is wrong; use 'approximately'. 'per minute' is unlikely—use 'per month'. 'a branded shoes' mixes article and plural; remove 'a' before 'branded shoes'. Use simple present 'I earn' for habitual/regular income.

× But I usually go for good quality shoes which are quite comfortable as well as affordable.

✓ But I usually choose good-quality shoes that are both comfortable and affordable.

'go for' is acceptable but 'choose' is clearer; 'good quality' should be hyphenated as 'good-quality' before noun. Use 'that are both' to link two adjectives naturally.

× Before my work, I usually prefer comfortable shoes because I have to stand for a whole day and I want comfort more than just fashion.

✓ For work, I usually prefer comfortable shoes because I have to stand all day and I want comfort more than fashion.

'Before my work' is unnatural—use 'for work'. 'a whole day' -> 'all day'. Simplify 'more than just fashion' to 'more than fashion' for conciseness.

× But whenever I want to go for any ceremony or occasion such as wedding, birthday parties, I prefer trendy shoes.

✓ But whenever I go to a ceremony or occasion, such as a wedding or a birthday party, I prefer trendy shoes.

Use 'go to' not 'go for' with events. Use articles 'a wedding' and 'a birthday party' and singular/plural consistency. Move examples inside commas for clarity.

× So which compliment which can?

✓ So which will complement which?

Original is ungrammatical and unclear. Likely intended: 'So which complements which?' or 'So which will complement which?' Use auxiliary 'will' or simple present 'complements' and correct word order to form a question.