Shoes— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and structured. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No + frequency), then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid repetition and keep to 2–4 sentences.

Example: Yes, I do. I usually buy shoes about once a year because I like trying different brands. For example, I prefer lightweight sneakers for daily use since they are comfortable and easy to walk in.

Suggestion: Answer directly and correct vocabulary (use 'shoes' not 'suits'). Give a clear reason and one supporting detail. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' and avoid unclear phrases.

Example: No, I have never bought shoes online because photos often look different from the real product. Therefore I prefer visiting a store so I can try them on to check the fit, comfort and color before buying.

Suggestion: Give a clear estimate and one or two reasons. Avoid repetition and improve grammar (e.g., 'brand recognition', 'long-lasting'). Use numbers to be specific.

Example: I usually spend around $100 to $150 on a good pair of shoes because I value brand recognition and quality. As a result, they tend to be more durable and can last three to four years.

Suggestion: State your preference clearly and give a specific reason and example. Use correct vocabulary ('shoes', 'high heels') and correct grammar for clarity. Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Example: I prefer comfortable shoes because I find high heels painful and hard to walk in. For instance, when I wear heels for more than an hour my feet hurt, so I usually choose sneakers or low-heeled shoes for long days.

× I would say yes because I enjoy buying different varieties of brand shoes and I love them to wear because it feels so comfortable and it's so light and convenient to wear and I usually buy shoes once a year.

✓ I would say yes because I enjoy buying different brands of shoes and I love wearing them because they feel comfortable, light, and convenient, and I usually buy shoes once a year.

The student uses awkward adjective phrases and incorrect pronoun agreement: 'different varieties of brand shoes' should be 'different brands of shoes'; 'I love them to wear' is incorrect—use 'I love wearing them'; 'it feels so comfortable' should agree in number with 'shoes' so use 'they feel comfortable'. Also use commas to separate adjectives 'comfortable, light, and convenient' and remove redundancy.

× No, I have never bought suits online because the pictures of fun don't match reality.

✓ No, I have never bought shoes online because the pictures often don't match reality.

The student wrote 'suits' instead of 'shoes' and 'pictures of fun' is likely a misphrase. Use present perfect 'have never bought' is correct; change 'suits' to 'shoes' and 'pictures often don't match reality' fixes vocabulary and word order. 'Often' is the correct adverb to indicate frequency.

× I prefer going to physical stores so I can try suits on the feed, comfort and color before I buy and I can see whether it is comfortable for me or not by going to.

✓ I prefer going to physical stores so I can try shoes on to check the fit, comfort, and color before I buy, and I can see whether they are comfortable for me.

Multiple issues: 'suits' should be 'shoes'; 'try suits on the feed' is incorrect—use 'try shoes on to check the fit'; 'fit' is the correct noun, not 'feed'. Also change 'it is comfortable' to 'they are comfortable' to agree with plural 'shoes'. Remove awkward 'by going to'.

× I usually spend more more money on shoes because I like wearing shoes which are which have high brand recognization and if and having a good quality suits will and it will be long more long lasting and you don't have to buy new shoes for three to four years.

✓ I usually spend more money on shoes because I like wearing well-known brands that have good quality; they last longer so you don't have to buy new shoes for three to four years.

Remove duplicated 'more more'. Replace 'high brand recognization' with 'well-known brands' or 'high brand recognition'; 'suits' should be 'shoes'; simplify and correct tense and word order: 'having a good quality suits will and it will be long more long lasting' is ungrammatical—use 'they last longer'. Use plural pronoun 'they' to refer to 'shoes'.

× I would say I prefer comfortable suits because whenever I wear a high heels it feels so uncomfortable for me and I cannot walk even off even for one hours with the high heels.

✓ I would say I prefer comfortable shoes because whenever I wear high heels they feel very uncomfortable for me and I cannot walk even for one hour in them.

Replace 'suits' with 'shoes'. Use 'high heels' without 'a' and agree plural: 'they feel' not 'it feels'. Use 'for one hour' (singular) not 'one hours', and 'in them' is the correct prepositional phrase. 'Very' is clearer than 'so' here.

× So having a comfortable suits I can work more than here and there for more hours.

✓ So with comfortable shoes I can work longer and move around more during the day.

'suits' should be 'shoes'; phrase 'more than here and there for more hours' is unclear and ungrammatical. Rephrase to 'I can work longer and move around more during the day' to express the intended meaning. Use 'with comfortable shoes' for correct structure.