Shoes— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be direct, use correct grammar and concise sentences. Start with a clear topic sentence (e.g. “I don’t often buy new shoes.”), then add one brief reason using linking words. Correct subject-verb agreement and articles (a/the) are needed. Limit to 2–3 sentences and avoid repetition.

Example: I don’t often buy new shoes. However, when I do, I usually choose comfortable ones because I wear them for long periods.

Suggestion: Answer directly and use clear reasons with correct grammar and word order. Use linking phrases (for example, because, so) and avoid vague or repetitive wording. Say why with one specific detail about your experience or concern.

Example: No, I have never bought shoes online because I am worried about scams and unreliable delivery in my area. For example, some sellers do not ship to my town, so I prefer buying from local shops.

Suggestion: Give a clear, correctly formed sentence stating the amount and currency, then add a short explanation. Use correct verb forms and vocabulary (e.g. pair, not soup). Keep it to one or two sentences.

Example: I usually spend about 3,000 Nepalese rupees on a pair of shoes. I prefer to buy mid-range shoes that are comfortable and durable.

Suggestion: State your preference clearly, then give one concise, specific reason using linking words. Use correct vocabulary (shoes, not suits) and avoid repetition. Keep it to two sentences maximum.

Example: I prefer comfortable shoes rather than fashionable ones because my feet hurt if shoes are too tight or stiff. Therefore, I choose shoes with good support even if they are less stylish.

× I did not like to really buy a new shoes, but when they buy I usually look for a comfortable shoes.

✓ I do not really like to buy new shoes, but when I do I usually look for comfortable shoes.

The student mixed past tense 'did not like' with habitual present 'usually'. Use present simple 'do not really like' for general preference. 'A new shoes' is wrong: 'shoes' is plural so no 'a' and 'new' stays before plural noun. 'When they buy' uses incorrect subject 'they' and tense; replace with 'when I do' to refer to the student purchasing.

× No, I never bought the shoes in online because nowadays online is also a scammer and they also not send like where where we are so that kind of suits.

✓ No, I have never bought shoes online because there are scammers online and they do not send items to where we are, so that kind of thing suits me not.

Use present perfect 'have never bought' for life experience up to now. 'The shoes in online' is incorrect: use 'shoes online' without article and preposition. 'Online is also a scammer' incorrectly treats 'online' as a person; use 'there are scammers online'. Negation 'they also not send' requires auxiliary 'do not send'. 'Where where we are' is awkward; 'to where we are' clarifies location. Final phrase 'so that kind of suits' is ungrammatical; interpret as 'that kind of thing suits me not' or better 'I avoid it' but kept literal structure.

× I usually spends Nepali 3 thousands for one piece of soup.

✓ I usually spend 3,000 Nepalese rupees for one pair of shoes.

Subject-verb agreement: with subject 'I' use 'spend' not 'spends'. 'Nepali 3 thousands' is incorrect quantifier and word order; use '3,000 Nepalese rupees'. 'One piece of soup' is likely a mistaken phrase; context about shoes requires 'one pair of shoes'. Adjusted to match meaning.

× I prefer comfortable suits because in every every way or every every of the foot park that suits feel me uncomfortable.

✓ I prefer comfortable shoes because in every way shoes that squeeze the foot feel uncomfortable to me.

The student used 'suits' instead of 'shoes' and repeated words 'every every'. 'Feel me uncomfortable' is incorrect word order and use of pronoun; correct form is 'feel uncomfortable to me' or 'make my feet uncomfortable'. Clarified 'in every way' and expressed that shoes that squeeze the foot are uncomfortable.