Shoes— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be direct and clear: start with a topic sentence answering the question, then give one or two specific supporting details. Use correct tense and simpler grammar (e.g., 'I seldom buy shoes' not 'seldom to buy'). Keep it within 3–4 sentences and avoid unrelated phrases.

Example: I don't buy shoes very often. I usually keep a pair for several years and only buy new ones when the old ones wear out. For example, my current pair has lasted about four years, so I try to shop infrequently and buy durable shoes.

Suggestion: Answer directly and coherently: state whether you have and give a clear reason or brief detail. Avoid repetition and unclear words like 'foils'. Use linking words ('so', 'because', 'for example') correctly and keep 2–3 sentences maximum.

Example: Yes, I bought shoes online last week because it was easier to find my size. The website had accurate measurements, so I was confident the shoes would fit. I prefer online shopping when physical stores don't have my size.

Suggestion: Start with a direct answer about the typical cost, then briefly explain why. Use concise, natural sentences and correct grammar (e.g., 'due to digitalization' not 'because of the developing of'). Give a specific range and a reason or example in one extra sentence.

Example: I usually spend around ₹300 to ₹500 on a pair of shoes. Due to online marketplaces and competition, I can often find good-quality shoes at lower prices. For instance, I recently bought trainers for about ₹400 on a sale site.

Suggestion: Answer directly (state preference) and give a concise reason with a specific example. Use correct grammar and linking words like 'because' or 'so'. Keep it within 2–3 clear sentences and avoid repetition.

Example: I prefer comfortable shoes because I wear them every day and need them to last. For example, I choose cushioned sneakers over high heels since they are better for walking and last longer.

× One of the things that I had in my little room in my home is shoes, but I seldom to buy shoes but actually can like a four years shoes that I collect until.

✓ One of the things that I had in my little room in my home was shoes, but I seldom bought shoes; actually I have a collection of shoes that I have kept for about four years.

Errors: plural/singular mismatch and incorrect verb forms. 'One of the things ... is shoes' is awkward because 'one of the things' requires a plural set and the verb should agree with past context, so use 'was'. 'Seldom to buy' is incorrect; use the past simple 'seldom bought' or 'I seldom buy'. 'Can like a four years shoes that I collect until' is ungrammatical: use 'I have a collection of shoes that I have kept for about four years.' Suggestion: decide on tense (past or present) and ensure nouns are correctly pluralized and verbs agree with subject and tense.

× Yes I do, I bought shoes online last week because it foils. I haven't bought shoes and I decide to buy shoes online. It's according to my size.

✓ Yes, I did. I bought shoes online last week because the store ran out in person. I hadn't found the shoes in stores, so I decided to buy them online because they matched my size.

Errors: inconsistent tense and incorrect expressions. 'Yes I do' should match past reference 'bought last week' so use 'Yes, I did.' 'Because it foils' is unclear and grammatically wrong; likely intended 'because the store ran out' or 'the shop didn't have my size.' 'I haven't bought shoes and I decide' mixes present perfect and present simple; use 'I hadn't found them in stores, so I decided.' Also use correct pronouns ('them') and past tense consistency. Suggestion: keep past events in past tense and use clear vocabulary for reasons.

× Because of the developing of the digitalization and Internet, I think today the marketplace is one of the place that provide the cheapest shoes I ever buy. It's average ₹300 to ₹500. I prefer to buy shoes today.

✓ Because of the development of digitalization and the Internet, I think today's marketplaces are some of the places that provide the cheapest shoes I have bought. They usually cost between ₹300 and ₹500. I prefer to buy shoes online now.

Errors: wrong prepositions and articles. Use 'development of' not 'developing of.' Use 'the Internet' and 'today's marketplaces' (possessive) and plural 'places' to match 'one of the places.' 'Provide the cheapest shoes I ever buy' mixes tenses; use present perfect 'I have bought.' 'It's average' should be 'They usually cost between...' Suggestion: use correct prepositions and articles and ensure noun number agreement.

× Because shoes is one thing that I can wear every day and it's a long wear that I can wear until several years, I prefer to do comfortable shoes to wear.

✓ Because shoes are something I can wear every day and they last for several years, I prefer to choose comfortable shoes.

Errors: subject-verb agreement and awkward phrasing. 'Shoes is' should be 'Shoes are.' 'It's a long wear that I can wear until several years' is ungrammatical; use 'they last for several years.' 'I prefer to do comfortable shoes to wear' should be 'I prefer to choose comfortable shoes' or 'I prefer comfortable shoes.' Suggestion: ensure plural subjects take plural verbs and use natural collocations ('last for several years', 'prefer to choose').