Shoes— Part 1 Report
Conversation
Part 1
Examiner
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
Candidate
Well, actually I do like to buy shoes when I was in primary school because at at that time I prefer the culture called sneaker culture. But now I don't think it is a really, really so-called culture because I just believe that it is a culture that.
Examiner
Have you ever bought shoes online?
Candidate
Yes, of course that is unavoidable for every single Chinese person because e-commerce has become more and more popular around the whole country and it is truly convenient to receive your shoes just after a few days when you buying the shoes after.
Examiner
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
Candidate
Well I used to think of shoes should be 1000 or 2000 when I was young due to the sneaky culture. But now I think shoes need to be just below 1000 because now I should configure all the my budget and my friend finance situation.
Examiner
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
Candidate
Well, I would like to say that I prefer fashionable shoes when I was young, but now I have a more preference to the comfortable shoes. But considering of all the aspects, if shoes can combine the fashion and comfortable, that would be better for me.
Evaluation
Overall
Grammar
× Well, actually I do like to buy shoes when I was in primary school because at at that time I prefer the culture called sneaker culture.
✓ Well, actually I liked to buy shoes when I was in primary school because at that time I preferred the culture called sneaker culture.
这里描述的是过去的情况，动词时态应使用过去式。原句中使用了现在时态，时态不一致。建议将'do like'改为'liked'，'prefer'改为'preferred'。
× But now I don't think it is a really, really so-called culture because I just believe that it is a culture that.
✓ But now I don't think it is a really, really so-called culture because I just believe that it is a culture.
句子末尾不完整，缺少谓语或完整表达。应删除多余的'that'，使句子完整通顺。
× ...and it is truly convenient to receive your shoes just after a few days when you buying the shoes after.
✓ ...and it is truly convenient to receive your shoes just after a few days when you buy the shoes.
动词buy后面不应直接加-ing形式，正确用法是一般现在时buy。这里描述习惯动作，应使用一般现在时。
× Well I used to think of shoes should be 1000 or 2000 when I was young due to the sneaky culture.
✓ Well, I used to think shoes should cost 1000 or 2000 when I was young due to the sneaker culture.
'think of shoes should be 1000 or 2000'表达不准确，缺少动词cost且'sneaky'应为'sneaker'。应调整表达使其更自然准确。
× But now I think shoes need to be just below 1000 because now I should configure all the my budget and my friend finance situation.
✓ But now I think shoes need to be just below 1000 because now I should manage my entire budget and my friend's financial situation.
'configure all the my budget'表达错误，'my friend finance situation'缺少所有格。应使用'manage'替代'configure'，并改为'my friend's financial situation'。
× Well, I would like to say that I prefer fashionable shoes when I was young, but now I have a more preference to the comfortable shoes.
✓ Well, I would like to say that I preferred fashionable shoes when I was young, but now I have more preference for comfortable shoes.
'have a more preference to'搭配错误，正确搭配是'preference for'。同时时态应与时间状语一致，过去时用'preferred'。
× But considering of all the aspects, if shoes can combine the fashion and comfortable, that would be better for me.
✓ But considering all aspects, if shoes can combine fashion and comfort, that would be better for me.
'considering of'用法错误，应为'considering'。'combine the fashion and comfortable'搭配不当，应改为'combine fashion and comfort'。
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