List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by making it more natural and grammatically correct. Try to avoid redundancy and use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, instead of 'So that things which are I'm going to purchase should not be. Forgotten by me,' you can say 'so that I don't forget the items I need to buy.'

Example: Yes, I usually make a list on a mobile application before I go shopping, so that I don't forget the items I need to buy.

Suggestion: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical errors and lacks coherence. Use linking words and correct sentence structures. For example, say 'Yes, I make a list for my work every morning because I am not good at remembering things. It helps me organize my tasks throughout the day.'

Example: Yes, I make a list for my work every morning because I am not good at remembering things. It helps me organize my tasks throughout the day.

Suggestion: Your answer needs to be clearer and more structured. Avoid run-on sentences and use linking words like 'because' and 'however' properly. For example, 'Some people don't like making lists because they find it tedious and think they can remember tasks mentally. However, others like me prefer lists to stay organized.'

Example: Some people don't like making lists because they find it tedious and believe they can remember tasks mentally. However, others like me prefer lists to stay organized.

Suggestion: Your answer is good but can be improved by making it more concise and natural. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, 'I prefer making lists on my phone because it is easily accessible wherever I go, so I can quickly check my tasks anytime.'

Example: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is easily accessible wherever I go, so I can quickly check my tasks anytime.

× Yes, I make list when I go out for shopping.

✓ Yes, I make a list when I go out for shopping.

The noun 'list' is countable and singular here, so it requires the indefinite article 'a' before it to be grammatically correct.

× Usually I keep my all the things which are needed to be purchased in a mobile application.

✓ Usually I keep all the things that need to be purchased in a mobile application.

The phrase 'my all the things' is incorrect; 'all the things' is sufficient. Also, 'which are needed to be purchased' is awkward; 'that need to be purchased' is more natural and grammatically correct.

× So that things which are I'm going to purchase should not be. Forgotten by me.

✓ So that the things I am going to purchase are not forgotten by me.

The original sentence is fragmented and incorrectly structured. 'So that' should introduce a purpose clause, and 'which are I'm going to purchase' is ungrammatical. The corrected sentence is a complete and clear statement.

× Yes, I make the list for my work and it also work from me because I'm pretty.

✓ Yes, I make the list for my work and it also works for me because I'm pretty

The verb 'work' must agree with the singular subject 'it', so it should be 'works'. Also, 'from me' is incorrect; 'for me' is the correct preposition here.

× Yes, I make the list for my work and it also work from me because I'm pretty.

✓ Yes, I make the list for my work and it also works for me because I'm pretty

The preposition 'from' is incorrect in this context; 'for' is the appropriate preposition to indicate benefit or suitability.

× I'm pretty. Bad in Remember the Things.

✓ I'm pretty bad at remembering things.

'Pretty' is an adverb modifying 'bad', which is correct, but 'in Remember the Things' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'bad at remembering things' using the gerund form.

× I make list in the morning of the what work I wanted to do throughout my day.

✓ I make a list in the morning of the work I want to do throughout my day.

The sentence is awkward and ungrammatical. 'Make list' should be 'make a list'. 'Of the what work' is incorrect; it should be 'of the work'. Also, 'wanted' should be 'want' to match present tense.

× Some people don't like to make list because they think it's a tedious and waste of time to make the list and can be remembered in brain but.

✓ Some people don't like to make lists because they think it's tedious and a waste of time to make a list and that it can be remembered in the brain.

'Make list' should be 'make lists' for plural consistency. 'A tedious and waste of time' is incorrect; it should be 'tedious and a waste of time'. 'Remembered in brain' needs the article 'the' before 'brain'. The sentence was also incomplete and needed restructuring.

× There are some people like me who are always make list of the things which are wanted to do.

✓ There are some people like me who always make lists of the things they want to do.

'Are always make' is incorrect; it should be 'always make'. 'Make list' should be 'make lists'. 'Which are wanted to do' is awkward; 'they want to do' is correct.

× I prefer to make the list on my phone application because it is easily accessible wherever I go.

✓ I prefer to make the list on my phone application because it is easily accessible wherever I go.

No singular/plural error in this sentence; it is correct as is.

× I can open my phone and see what are the things I wanted to do.

✓ I can open my phone and see what things I want to do.

The phrase 'what are the things I wanted to do' is incorrect. The correct form is 'what things I want to do' to maintain proper word order and tense.

× So I think it will be easy to me to keep the list in my phone.

✓ So I think it will be easy for me to keep the list on my phone.

The phrase 'easy to me' is incorrect; it should be 'easy for me'. Also, 'in my phone' is better expressed as 'on my phone' when referring to applications or lists stored digitally.