ListPart 1 Report

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Part 1

Examiner

Do you make a list when you shop?

Candidate

Not often 'cause I have a good memory and I also confident for myself, I think I can remember everything that I want it back. Bye.

Examiner

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Candidate

Now I am student so I often make list on my study especially in the. Faneuil test time 'cause I want to make a list to clear what I need to review and it is very clear that I can easily do know.

Examiner

Why don't some people like making lists?

Candidate

In my opening I think don't make list. And the one point is that. That people were confident in. Hurst in himself. End. They don't wanna make listed too wasted their time 'cause they can remember we can remember it. Ends.

Examiner

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Candidate

I prefer. On phone 'cause on the phone is a very common and you can say it every time. Will you make this on the paper? You might. You needed to found it and to keep it very well. So there's a very hard and the. Not comments. So I performed use my phone.

Evaluation

Overall

Overall: 5.0Fluency & Coherence: 5.5Pronunciation: 5.0Grammar: 5.0Lexical Resource: 5.0

Part 1

Do you make a list when you shop?

Score: 40.0

Suggestion: 回答不够连贯,语法错误较多,且回答过短,缺乏具体细节。建议练习使用完整句子,避免口语中的不连贯表达,并且增加具体原因或例子来丰富回答。

Example: I don't often make a list when I shop because I have a good memory. For example, I usually remember all the items I need without writing them down, which saves me time.

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Score: 50.0

Suggestion: 回答中有语法和表达错误,句子不完整,且逻辑不够清晰。建议练习使用完整句子,明确表达观点,并使用连接词使回答更连贯。

Example: As a student, I often make lists for my studies, especially before exams. This helps me clearly identify what I need to review, and it makes my preparation more organized and effective.

Why don't some people like making lists?

Score: 35.0

Suggestion: 回答表达混乱,语法错误严重,且缺乏具体细节。建议练习用完整句子表达观点,避免重复和无意义的词汇,并提供具体原因。

Example: I think some people don't like making lists because they are confident in their memory. They believe it's a waste of time since they can remember tasks without writing them down.

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Score: 45.0

Suggestion: 回答不够流畅,语法和表达错误较多,且逻辑不清晰。建议练习用完整句子表达偏好,说明原因,并使用连接词使回答更连贯。

Example: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is convenient and easy to access anytime. Unlike paper lists, I don't have to worry about losing them or keeping them in good condition.

Grammar

Subject-verb agreement errors

× Not often 'cause I have a good memory and I also confident for myself, I think I can remember everything that I want it back. Bye.

Not often 'cause I have a good memory and I am also confident in myself. I think I can remember everything that I want to get back. Bye.

这里缺少动词“am”,导致主语和动词不一致。'confident'是形容词,需要用系动词'am'连接。'confident for myself'应改为'confident in myself',介词使用错误。'want it back'中多余的'it'应去掉,改为'want to get back'。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× Not often 'cause I have a good memory and I also confident for myself, I think I can remember everything that I want it back. Bye.

Not often 'cause I have a good memory and I am also confident in myself. I think I can remember everything that I want to get back. Bye.

'confident'后面应接介词'in',表示对自己有信心,'for'用法错误。

Sentence structure errors

× Now I am student so I often make list on my study especially in the. Faneuil test time 'cause I want to make a list to clear what I need to review and it is very clear that I can easily do know.

Now I am a student, so I often make lists for my study, especially during the final test time, because I want to make a list to clarify what I need to review, and it is very clear so that I can easily do it now.

缺少冠词'a','make list'应为'make lists','on my study'应为'for my study','in the. Faneuil test time'应为'during the final test time',句子结构混乱,需调整使其通顺。

Singular and plural issue

× Now I am student so I often make list on my study especially in the. Faneuil test time 'cause I want to make a list to clear what I need to review and it is very clear that I can easily do know.

Now I am a student, so I often make lists for my study, especially during the final test time, because I want to make a list to clarify what I need to review, and it is very clear so that I can easily do it now.

'student'前缺少冠词'a','make list'应为'make lists',因为通常是复数形式。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× Now I am student so I often make list on my study especially in the. Faneuil test time 'cause I want to make a list to clear what I need to review and it is very clear that I can easily do know.

Now I am a student, so I often make lists for my study, especially during the final test time, because I want to make a list to clarify what I need to review, and it is very clear so that I can easily do it now.

'make list on my study'中介词'on'用法错误,应为'for',表示为学习做清单。'in the final test time'应为'during the final test time',表示在考试期间。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× In my opening I think don't make list. And the one point is that. That people were confident in. Hurst in himself. End. They don't wanna make listed too wasted their time 'cause they can remember we can remember it. Ends.

In my opinion, I think some people don't make lists. One reason is that people are confident in themselves. They don't want to make lists because they think it wastes their time since they can remember things.

'opening'应为'opinion','were confident in. Hurst in himself'语法错误且拼写错误,应为'are confident in themselves',代词使用错误。'make listed'应为'make lists','wasted'时态错误,应为'waste'。句子结构混乱,需调整。

Past tense issue

× In my opening I think don't make list. And the one point is that. That people were confident in. Hurst in himself. End. They don't wanna make listed too wasted their time 'cause they can remember we can remember it. Ends.

In my opinion, I think some people don't make lists. One reason is that people are confident in themselves. They don't want to make lists because they think it wastes their time since they can remember things.

'were confident'时态不合适,描述一般事实应使用一般现在时'are confident'。'wasted'应为一般现在时'waste',因为描述习惯行为。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× In my opening I think don't make list. And the one point is that. That people were confident in. Hurst in himself. End. They don't wanna make listed too wasted their time 'cause they can remember we can remember it. Ends.

In my opinion, I think some people don't make lists. One reason is that people are confident in themselves. They don't want to make lists because they think it wastes their time since they can remember things.

'Hurst in himself'拼写错误,应为'trust in themselves'或'confident in themselves',代词应为复数'themselves',表示他们自己。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× I prefer. On phone 'cause on the phone is a very common and you can say it every time. Will you make this on the paper? You might. You needed to found it and to keep it very well. So there's a very hard and the. Not comments. So I performed use my phone.

I prefer using my phone because the phone is very common and you can use it anytime. If you make a list on paper, you might need to find it and keep it well, which is very hard. So, I prefer to use my phone.

'prefer. On phone'结构不完整,应为'I prefer using my phone'。'say it every time'表达不准确,应为'use it anytime'。'make this on the paper'应为'make a list on paper'。'needed to found it'应为'need to find it',时态和词形错误。句子结构混乱,需调整。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× I prefer. On phone 'cause on the phone is a very common and you can say it every time. Will you make this on the paper? You might. You needed to found it and to keep it very well. So there's a very hard and the. Not comments. So I performed use my phone.

I prefer using my phone because the phone is very common and you can use it anytime. If you make a list on paper, you might need to find it and keep it well, which is very hard. So, I prefer to use my phone.

'on phone'应为'using my phone','make this on the paper'应为'make a list on paper',介词使用错误。

Vocabulary

BackRear; Reverse; Backward
ClearUnderstandable; Obvious; Transparent; Bright; Unobstructed
GoodFine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
HardFirm; Arduous; Difficult; Harsh; Strict
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