List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is clear and relevant, but you can improve by correcting minor grammatical errors and making the sentences more natural. For example, say "when I shop for groceries" instead of "when a shop for groceries." Also, try to use linking words like "because" to connect ideas smoothly.

Example: Yes, I usually make a list before I go shopping because it helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget any important items. For example, when I shop for groceries, having a list saves me time and prevents me from buying unnecessary things.

Suggestion: Your answer needs better sentence structure and clarity. Avoid fragmented sentences and try to connect your ideas logically using linking words like "first," "then," and "so." Also, correct word choice such as "effectively" instead of "affectively."

Example: Yes, I make a list of tasks to be done each day. First, when I wake up, I check my diary to see the schedule. Then, I organize my work accordingly, which helps me complete tasks efficiently and improve my productivity.

Suggestion: Your answer has several grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Try to express your ideas more clearly and avoid repetition. Use linking words like "because" and "or" to connect reasons logically. Also, correct phrases like "don't like make English" to "don't like making lists."

Example: Some people don't like making lists because they have a good memory and can remember their tasks clearly. Others might avoid lists due to procrastination. However, I prefer making lists before doing any work to stay organized.

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but has grammatical mistakes and some unclear parts. Try to use complete sentences and avoid repetition. Use linking words like "but" and "nowadays" to show contrast and time. Also, correct phrases like "making less right" to "making lists regularly."

Example: Actually, I have had a habit of making lists since my childhood. Back in school and college, I used to write lists on paper or in my diary. But nowadays, as I use my phone daily, I prefer making notes on it because it helps me set reminders and stay organized.

× For example, when a shop for groceries, having a list saves me time and prevents me from buying unnecessary things.

✓ For example, when I shop for groceries, having a list saves me time and prevents me from buying unnecessary things.

The sentence is missing the subject 'I' before the verb 'shop'. Without the subject, the sentence is grammatically incorrect. Adding 'I' corrects the singular subject-verb structure.

× Yes, I do make a list of work that has to be done in a day, so first thing I will once I wake up in the morning. Is check my diary.

✓ Yes, I do make a list of work that has to be done in a day, so the first thing I do once I wake up in the morning is check my diary.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks proper structure. Combining the fragments into a complete sentence with correct word order improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× So what is the schedule of work that has to be done? On the particular day, so it helps me organize the work affectively.

✓ So what is the schedule of work that has to be done on that particular day? It helps me organize the work effectively.

The preposition 'on' should be connected directly to 'that particular day' without a period interrupting the sentence. Also, 'affectively' is incorrect; the correct word is 'effectively' to describe how the work is organized.

× Ann and the work is done. In an efficient manner that improves me doing.

✓ And the work is done in an efficient manner that improves my performance.

The original sentence contains unclear pronoun usage and fragmented structure. Replacing 'me doing' with 'my performance' clarifies the meaning and corrects pronoun use.

× Some people don't like make English because they have a good memory of good memory of understanding things and they can memorize what work they have to be done.

✓ Some people don't like to make lists because they have a good memory and can memorize the work they have to do.

The phrase 'don't like make English' is incorrect. It should be 'don't like to make lists'. Also, 'have to be done' should be 'have to do' to correctly express obligation in active voice.

× They have a picture perfect clarity of what they're doing.

✓ They have picture-perfect clarity of what they're doing.

The phrase 'a picture perfect clarity' is incorrect because 'clarity' is an uncountable noun and does not take an article here. Also, 'picture-perfect' should be hyphenated as a compound adjective.

× Or maybe sometimes it might be because of procrastination. People don't make list, but I'd prefer making lists before in doing any work.

✓ Or maybe sometimes it might be because of procrastination. People don't make lists, but I'd prefer making lists before doing any work.

'People don't make list' should be 'People don't make lists' to match plural form. Also, 'before in doing any work' is incorrect; it should be 'before doing any work'.

× Actually I have a habit of making less right from my childhood.

✓ Actually, I have had a habit of making lists right from my childhood.

'Making less' is incorrect; it should be 'making lists' (plural). Also, 'have had' is better to express a habit continuing from childhood to present.

× So back in the days when I was in school or college so I used to make list on my. Paper or diary so.

✓ So back in the days when I was in school or college, I used to make lists on my paper or diary.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains unnecessary conjunctions. Removing extra 'so' and combining the sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× But right now as I'm more addicted to phone or using phone on a daily basis I make notes on my phone so it helps me set my reminders and get get away.

✓ But right now, as I'm more addicted to my phone and use it on a daily basis, I make notes on my phone so it helps me set my reminders and get things done.

The phrase 'addicted to phone' should be 'addicted to my phone'. Also, 'get get away' is unclear; 'get things done' is a better expression. Adding commas improves sentence flow.