List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to make your answer clearer and more structured. Start with a direct response, then explain why you make a list when shopping. Avoid unclear phrases and redundancy. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to connect your ideas logically.

Example: Yes, I always make a list before I go shopping because it helps me remember what I need to buy and avoid unnecessary purchases. This way, I can save money and shop more efficiently.

Suggestion: Answer directly and clearly. Use proper sentence structure and linking words to explain how making a list helps you at work. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases.

Example: Yes, I make a list of my tasks before I start work, and it really helps me stay organised. Every time I complete a task, I tick it off, which motivates me to keep going.

Suggestion: Focus on giving clear reasons why some people dislike making lists. Use linking words like 'because' and 'also' to connect ideas. Avoid unclear or incorrect words and try to be more specific.

Example: Some people don't like making lists because they find it boring and prefer the freedom to decide what to do spontaneously. Also, making lists takes time and practice, which they might not want to invest.

Suggestion: Give a clear preference and explain why. Use linking words to connect your ideas. Avoid unclear phrases and repetition. Try to be specific about how using paper helps you.

Example: I prefer to make lists on paper, especially in my planner notebook. Writing things down helps me remember better and I enjoy the feeling of crossing off completed tasks.

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✓ Yes, for me, I think making a plan before I go shopping is really important because it is clearer and I can buy things I like. It also helps me manage my money well, which means I can save money.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'make a plan for before I go to the shopping' which is awkward and ungrammatical. The verb phrase should be 'making a plan before I go shopping' using the gerund form to express the activity. Also, 'more like a clearly' is incorrect; 'clearer' is the correct comparative adjective. The sentence structure is confusing and needs to be simplified for clarity.

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✓ Yes, before I work, I make a list of all my jobs. It really works for me, and every day when I finish my plan, I mark it. So yeah, I think it is really, really important for me.

The original sentence has several issues: 'make yes, I make a list' is redundant and confusing; 'all my job is really worked for me' is ungrammatical and should be 'all my jobs. It really works for me.' Also, 'where I finish my plan' should be 'when I finish my plan.' The verb forms and sentence structure need correction for clarity and grammatical accuracy.

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✓ Well, I think many people don't like to make mental lists because they don't have this kind of hobby and prefer to be happy. They also want more freedom or don't like anyone telling them how to make a list or the data type because, yeah, it also needs time to practice.

The original sentence misuses pronouns and has unclear references, such as 'didn't have this kind of hobby and happy' which is ungrammatical. 'They also more freedom' lacks a verb and should be 'they also want more freedom.' Pronouns and verb forms need correction to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× Bill, I prefer to make a list on my paper and especially for my notebook.

✓ Well, I prefer to make a list on paper, especially in my notebook.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'on my paper' which is unnatural; the correct preposition is 'on paper.' Also, 'especially for my notebook' should be 'especially in my notebook' because lists are written inside notebooks. Prepositions need to be corrected for natural English usage.

× I got a plan notebook and every day I write my apply on my on my new notebook.

✓ I have a planner notebook, and every day I write my plans in my new notebook.

The phrase 'I got a plan notebook' is informal and should be 'I have a planner notebook.' 'I write my apply' is incorrect; it should be 'I write my plans.' Also, 'on my on my new notebook' is repetitive and should be 'in my new notebook.' Pronouns and word choice need correction for clarity and correctness.