List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is generally clear but contains grammatical errors and some redundancy. Try to use correct verb forms (e.g., 'when I shop') and avoid unnecessary words like 'Yeah' at the end. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly, for example, 'because' and 'and'.

Example: Yes, I make a list when I shop because it helps me remember important items and also keeps me within my budget.

Suggestion: Your answer is incomplete and contains grammatical mistakes. Avoid unfinished sentences and ensure clarity. Use linking words to explain why it works, and be specific about how it helps you.

Example: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me stay organised and remember all the essential tasks. It works well most of the time as it keeps my mind clear and focused.

Suggestion: Your answer has some repetition and awkward phrasing. Try to avoid filler words like 'so' and 'also' twice. Use clearer linking words such as 'firstly' and 'secondly' and correct grammar, for example, 'because they are lazy'.

Example: Firstly, some people feel confident in managing tasks without a list. Secondly, others may avoid making lists because they find it tedious or are too lazy to do it.

Suggestion: Your answer is clear but contains minor grammatical errors such as 'more easier' which should be 'easier'. Use linking words like 'because' and 'however' to improve coherence. Try to be more concise and avoid repeating similar ideas.

Example: Personally, I prefer making lists on my phone because it is easier to check and update. In contrast, paper lists require writing everything down and keeping the paper, which can be inconvenient.

× Yes, I do make a list when I shopping because I think it can help me to not forget anything important and it also helped me to keep my budget. Yeah.

✓ Yes, I do make a list when I am shopping because I think it can help me not to forget anything important and it also helps me to keep my budget. Yeah.

The verb 'shopping' needs to be in the present participle form with the auxiliary verb 'am' to form the present continuous tense ('I am shopping'). Also, 'helped' should be 'helps' to maintain present tense consistency. Additionally, 'help me to not forget' is better as 'help me not to forget' for natural phrasing.

× Yes, I do make a list of and I'm working. It helps me to keep my mind clear and it also help me to remember all the essential stuff I need to do. And I think it does work sometimes because.

✓ Yes, I do make a list of what I'm working on. It helps me to keep my mind clear and it also helps me to remember all the essential stuff I need to do. And I think it does work sometimes.

The phrase 'make a list of and I'm working' is incomplete and needs clarification; 'make a list of what I'm working on' is correct. 'Help' should be 'helps' to agree with singular subject 'it'. The sentence ending with 'because' is incomplete and should be finished or removed for clarity.

× So I think firstly they're they feel confident about their ability, like they can resolve everything very clearly by themselves. And also I also think some people don't make a list is just because they're lazy to do it.

✓ So I think firstly they feel confident about their ability, like they can resolve everything very clearly by themselves. And also, I think some people don't make a list just because they're lazy to do it.

The phrase 'they're they feel' contains an unnecessary pronoun 'they'. Removing the extra 'they' corrects the sentence. Also, 'I also think' is redundant after 'And also'; simplifying to 'I think' improves clarity.

× Personally I would like to make a list on my phone because it's more easier for me to check. And also if you make a list on paper you need to write everything down and you need to keep the paper every time, so it's kind of difficult.

✓ Personally, I would like to make a list on my phone because it's easier for me to check. Also, if you make a list on paper, you need to write everything down and keep the paper all the time, so it's kind of difficult.

The phrase 'more easier' is incorrect because 'easier' is already a comparative adjective; 'more' is unnecessary. Adding commas after introductory words improves readability. 'Keep the paper every time' is better expressed as 'keep the paper all the time' for natural phrasing.