List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but has some grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to make your sentences clearer and more concise. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then explain why making a list helps you, and conclude with a benefit.

Example: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me keep track of what I need to buy. This way, I don't forget anything important, and shopping becomes more efficient.

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat unclear and fragmented. Try to form complete sentences and directly answer the question. Use linking words to explain your habits and their effectiveness.

Example: I don't usually make a formal list for work, but sometimes I jot down tasks I need to complete. This helps me stay organized when I do it.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to express your ideas more clearly and logically. Use linking words to connect your reasons and opinions.

Example: Some people dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming or feel lazy. However, they might not realize that lists can help them complete tasks more efficiently and feel satisfied.

Suggestion: Your answer is confusing and has grammatical errors. Try to clearly state your preference and explain your reasons using linking words. Avoid unnecessary details that distract from your main point.

Example: I prefer making lists on paper because it helps me focus better. When I use my phone, I get distracted by other apps like Instagram, but paper has no such distractions.

× Yes, I do make a list when I show pad which is easier for me to mark things that I buy, so it is very easy to look up when I have a list on my hand so I don't miss anything.

✓ Yes, I do make a list when I shop which is easier for me to mark things that I buy, so it is very easy to look up when I have a list in my hand so I don't miss anything.

The word 'show pad' is incorrect and should be 'shop'. Also, the preposition 'on my hand' should be 'in my hand' because we hold lists in our hands, not on them.

× I have never tried making a list when I work, but I do write things. Sometimes I do. Write things like task. I will make a note of the task that I had to do, so it is. I don't do that all the time, but sometimes.

✓ I have never tried making a list when I work, but I do write things. Sometimes I write things like tasks. I make a note of the tasks that I have to do, so it is helpful. I don't do that all the time, but sometimes.

The sentence had fragmented and incorrect verb forms such as 'do. Write' which should be 'write'. Also, 'task' should be plural 'tasks' to match the context. 'I had to do' should be 'I have to do' to maintain present relevance.

× The reason for that might be there too lazy to make a list. I mean to make a list to take some time, so. They will be like instead of making a list of why I can't complete the task and believe it is decide they don't want to. I mean they don't know the satisfaction they get after doing more the task they listed.

✓ The reason for that might be they are too lazy to make a list. I mean, making a list takes some time, so they might think instead of making a list, why can't I complete the task? I believe they decide they don't want to. I mean, they don't know the satisfaction they get after completing more tasks they listed.

The pronoun 'there' is incorrect and should be 'they are'. Also, sentence structure and clarity needed correction to convey the intended meaning. 'Doing more the task' is incorrect; it should be 'completing more tasks'.

× From what I understood, are making a list on paper is very much. Good than Indiana phone like when you take the phone I don't think you will try to be on Instagram or other apps but when unit is on the book there is no other things so it is better to do.

✓ From what I understand, making a list on paper is much better than on a phone. Like when you take the phone, I don't think you will try to be on Instagram or other apps, but when it is on a book, there are no other distractions, so it is better to do.

The preposition 'than Indiana phone' is incorrect and should be 'than on a phone'. Also, 'unit is on the book' should be 'it is on a book'. Prepositions 'on' and 'in' must be used correctly to indicate location or medium.