List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use correct tense and structure, for example, say "because it helps me remember what I need to buy." Also, avoid redundancy by not repeating the same idea unnecessarily.

Example: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping at the supermarket because it helps me remember what I need to buy.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but has several grammar mistakes and unclear expressions. Use linking words like "because" and "for example" properly, and try to make your sentences clearer and more concise. For instance, say "I make a list for my work because it helps me remember tasks, especially when I have homework from many subjects."

Example: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me remember tasks. For example, when I have homework from many subjects, I list them to ensure I complete everything successfully.

Suggestion: Your answer needs clearer grammar and vocabulary. Use correct verb forms and plural nouns. Also, try to explain your ideas more naturally and logically. For example, say "Some people don't like making lists because they don't have many tasks to do. For instance, if they only have two assignments, they might not feel the need to make a list."

Example: Some people don't like making lists because they don't have many tasks to do. For example, if they only have two assignments, they might not feel the need to make a list.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical errors. Try to express your preference clearly and give a logical reason. Avoid confusing phrases like "I have forgot that where I keep it in my phone." Also, correct vocabulary such as "homeboy" which seems incorrect here. For example, say "I prefer making lists on paper because it's easier to remember than digital notes on my phone."

Example: I prefer making lists on paper because it's easier to remember than digital notes on my phone. Sometimes I forget where I saved my lists on my phone, so paper works better for me.

× I'm saying the reason why some people don't making less is because they don't have too many thing to do.

✓ I'm saying the reason why some people don't make lists is because they don't have too many things to do.

The verb 'do' should be followed by the base form 'make' instead of the '-ing' form 'making' after 'don't'. Also, 'less' should be 'lists' to match the context, and 'thing' should be plural 'things' to agree with 'too many'.

× I'm saying the reason why some people don't making less is because they don't have too many thing to do.

✓ I'm saying the reason why some people don't make lists is because they don't have too many things to do.

The noun 'thing' should be plural 'things' because it is preceded by 'too many', which requires a plural noun.

× I prefer making a list on paper because it's physical paper like right?

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper because it's physical paper, right?

After the verb 'prefer', the infinitive form 'to make' is more appropriate than the gerund 'making' in this context.

× I always make a list when I go to shopping at supermarket because it made me can remember one thing I will buy.

✓ I always make a list when I go shopping at the supermarket because it helps me remember the things I will buy.

The phrase 'go to shopping' is incorrect; it should be 'go shopping'. Also, 'at supermarket' needs the definite article 'the' before 'supermarket'. 'Made me can remember' is incorrect; it should be 'helps me remember'.

× because it made me can remember one thing I will buy.

✓ because it helps me remember the things I will buy.

The past tense 'made' is incorrect here because the action is habitual; present tense 'helps' is appropriate. Also, 'can' is unnecessary and incorrect in this structure.

× I always make a list for my work because if I don't make a list for my work I will forget something to do.

✓ I always make a list for my work because if I don't make a list, I will forget something to do.

The repetition of 'for my work' is redundant; removing the second instance improves clarity. Also, a comma is needed before 'I will forget' to separate clauses.

× Like for example when I have too many subject homework, I need to list which subject as it had homework today an I will can do it successfully.

✓ For example, when I have too much subject homework, I need to list which subjects have homework today and I can do it successfully.

'Too many subject homework' is incorrect; 'homework' is uncountable, so 'too much' is used. 'Subject' should be plural 'subjects' to match 'which subjects'. 'Had' should be present tense 'have' to match the context. 'An' is a typo for 'and'. 'Will can' is incorrect; 'can' alone suffices.

× For example I have record my homeboy.

✓ For example, I have recorded my homework.

'Record' should be in past participle 'recorded' after 'have'. 'Homeboy' is a typo for 'homework'. A comma is needed after 'For example'.