List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và có nội dung rõ ràng, tuy nhiên có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng chưa chính xác (ví dụ: 'house me' nên là 'helps me'). Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp để câu trả lời hiệu quả hơn.

Example: Yes, I often make a list before I go shopping because I don't want to forget anything important. Making a shopping list helps me avoid impulse buying and it also helps me stay within my budget. Additionally, I usually use a shopping app to organize my list efficiently.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi phát âm hoặc từ ngữ không chính xác (ví dụ: 'attached' và 'ties' không phù hợp trong ngữ cảnh). Bạn nên luyện tập phát âm và chọn từ vựng phù hợp để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Example: Definitely. I usually make a list of tasks I need to complete during the day because I have to handle various types of work. I also use an app to keep track of my tasks. I feel a sense of accomplishment when I complete items on my list and can check them off.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn còn lặp từ và thiếu sự mạch lạc, đồng thời có lỗi ngữ pháp (ví dụ: 'making list will. Uhm, I take a lot of time' không rõ nghĩa). Bạn nên luyện tập cách diễn đạt rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh.

Example: Some people may think that making a list takes too much time. They might also believe that they can complete their tasks without writing anything down, relying on their memory instead.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác (ví dụ: 'filling' thay vì 'feeling', 'ties' thay vì 'tasks', 'curse the test' không đúng nghĩa). Bạn nên luyện tập phát âm, chọn từ vựng phù hợp và cấu trúc câu rõ ràng hơn.

Example: For me, I prefer to make a list on paper because I enjoy the feeling of writing by hand. Every time I complete a task, I can physically cross it off the list, which gives me a great sense of satisfaction.

× Making a shopping list house me to avoid impulse buying and it helps me to stay in my budget.

✓ Making a shopping list helps me to avoid impulse buying and it helps me to stay within my budget.

The word 'house' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'helps'. Also, 'in my budget' should be 'within my budget' to express staying inside limits. This is an incorrect use of the definite article and verb choice.

× I usually make a list of attached during the day because there are various types I need to serve and I usually use the app to keep track of my ties.

✓ I usually make a list of tasks during the day because there are various types I need to serve and I usually use the app to keep track of my tasks.

The word 'attached' is incorrect; it should be 'tasks'. Also, 'ties' should be 'tasks'. This is an incorrect use of pronouns and vocabulary leading to confusion.

× I I I feel the sense of accomplishment when I make that list and I can cross check the things I complete.

✓ I feel a sense of accomplishment when I make that list and I can cross-check the things I have completed.

Repetition of 'I' is unnecessary. 'Cross check' should be hyphenated as 'cross-check'. Also, 'things I complete' should be 'things I have completed' to indicate past actions. This relates to pronoun use and verb tense.

× Some people may think that making list will. Uhm, I take a lot of time to do and then they they may feel that they can complete a task without making a list.

✓ Some people may think that making a list takes a lot of time to do and then they may feel that they can complete a task without making a list.

Missing article 'a' before 'list'. Also, 'will. Uhm, I take' is incorrect and should be 'takes'. This is an incorrect use of quantifiers and sentence structure.

× For me, I like to make a list on paper because I like the filling of writing on paper an every time I complete a ties I feel like there the moment when I can curse, curse the test of the list.

✓ For me, I like to make a list on paper because I like the feeling of writing on paper and every time I complete a task I feel like there is the moment when I can cross off the items on the list.

'Filling' should be 'feeling'. 'An' should be 'and'. 'Ties' should be 'task'. 'Curse, curse the test' is incorrect; it should be 'cross off the items'. This is an incorrect use of pronouns and vocabulary.