List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a direct response first, then explain briefly with clear and natural sentences. Avoid redundancy and unclear phrases.

Example: No, I don't usually make a list when I shop because I enjoy walking around the supermarket and choosing items spontaneously based on what I feel like buying at the moment.

Suggestion: Your answer has good content but is hard to understand due to grammar and unclear phrases. Use simple, clear sentences and organize your ideas logically with linking words.

Example: Yes, I usually make a list for my studies. Before I start, I write down what tasks I need to do and the order to complete them. This helps me stay organized and finish my projects on time.

Suggestion: Your answer addresses the question but could be clearer and more concise. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repetition. Also, try to use more precise vocabulary.

Example: Some people dislike making lists because it requires extra effort to plan and think ahead. They may find it inconvenient or prefer to be more spontaneous instead.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but contains some grammar mistakes and redundancy. Try to use clear, concise sentences and avoid filler words like 'like'.

Example: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's easier to carry and I always have my phone with me. This way, I can check my list anytime without worrying about losing a paper list.

× Actually not because I love. Walking in the supermarket Anne choosing from several things that I want to buy at the moment because I love roaming history, the supermarket, the rack and choose what I want at that time.

✓ Actually not because I love walking in the supermarket and choosing from several things that I want to buy at the moment because I love roaming around the supermarket, the racks, and choosing what I want at that time.

The original sentence incorrectly capitalizes 'Walking' and 'Anne' instead of 'and'. Also, 'roaming history' is incorrect; it should be 'roaming around'. The verb forms 'walking', 'choosing', and 'roaming' are present participles used correctly here to describe ongoing actions, but the sentence needs proper conjunctions and prepositions to be grammatically correct.

× Actually not because I love. Walking in the supermarket Anne choosing from several things that I want to buy at the moment because I love roaming history, the supermarket, the rack and choose what I want at that time.

✓ Actually not because I love walking in the supermarket and choosing from several things that I want to buy at the moment because I love roaming around the supermarket, the racks, and choosing what I want at that time.

The word 'Anne' is a misspelling of the conjunction 'and'. Using the correct conjunction 'and' connects the actions properly in the sentence.

× Actually not because I love. Walking in the supermarket Anne choosing from several things that I want to buy at the moment because I love roaming history, the supermarket, the rack and choose what I want at that time.

✓ Actually not because I love walking in the supermarket and choosing from several things that I want to buy at the moment because I love roaming around the supermarket, the racks, and choosing what I want at that time.

The phrase 'roaming history' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'around' to indicate movement within the supermarket area.

× Yes because I'm a student so all my majority of my work is study.

✓ Yes, because I'm a student, the majority of my work is studying.

The original sentence has redundant words and awkward structure. 'All my majority of my work' is incorrect; 'the majority of my work' is sufficient. Also, 'is study' should be 'is studying' to use the gerund form as a noun.

× So before starting out make a list of what I should start, where I should start it and which do I get started.

✓ So before starting, I make a list of what I should start, where I should start, and which task I should begin with.

The original sentence lacks a subject and has awkward phrasing. Adding 'I' clarifies the subject. 'Which do I get started' is incorrect; it should be 'which task I should begin with' for clarity and correctness.

× And wished I get angry and we should try and get to the nest nest project.

✓ And when I get angry, I try to calm down and then move on to the next project.

The original sentence is unclear and contains pronoun misuse. 'Wished I get angry' is incorrect; it should be 'when I get angry'. 'We should try and get to the nest nest project' is confusing; it should be 'I try to calm down and then move on to the next project' to clarify the subject and action.

× So I think that it is worth it works.

✓ So I think that it is worth it and it works.

The original sentence is incomplete and confusing. Adding 'and it works' completes the thought and improves clarity.

× I think that sometimes I don't like making list too, because it is kind of like, it is not that easy, not that convenient.

✓ I think that sometimes I don't like making lists too, because it is kind of like, it is not that easy, not that convenient.

The word 'list' should be plural 'lists' because it refers to the general activity of making lists, which is countable and plural in this context.

× Because when you make a list, you need to think, I need to think about what you're going to do an what should you do?

✓ Because when you make a list, you need to think; I need to think about what you're going to do and what you should do.

The sentence mixes second person 'you' and first person 'I' inconsistently. Also, 'an' is a typo for 'and'. Correcting pronoun consistency and conjunction improves clarity.

× So it is not that convenient, not good for people to make list.

✓ So it is not that convenient, not good for people to make lists.

'List' should be plural 'lists' to refer to the general activity of making lists.

× Of course, of course on my phone, because like if I use make a list on the paper, it will like sometimes it is very difficult to carry an it's easily to thrown away.

✓ Of course, of course on my phone, because if I make a list on paper, sometimes it is very difficult to carry and it's easy to throw away.

The phrase 'use make a list' is incorrect; it should be 'make a list'. 'On the paper' should be 'on paper'. 'Easily to thrown away' is incorrect; it should be 'easy to throw away'. Also, 'an' is a typo for 'and'.

× So but if I ripped, if I make a list on my phone, it is much more easier because I always holding my phone.

✓ But if I make a list on my phone, it is much easier because I am always holding my phone.

'Much more easier' is incorrect; 'much easier' is correct. 'I always holding' should be 'I am always holding' to use the present continuous tense properly. 'If I ripped' is unclear and removed for clarity.

× Whenever I want to check the list, I will take my phone and check it.

✓ Whenever I want to check the list, I take my phone and check it.

Using 'will' here is unnecessary for habitual actions; simple present tense 'take' is more appropriate.