List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn. Bạn nên sử dụng thì hiện tại đơn cho thói quen và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'shopped on'. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên ngắn gọn, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp hơn.

Example: Yes, I always make a shopping list because I tend to forget things easily. It helps me remember what I need to buy and saves time.

Suggestion: Bạn nên sử dụng câu có cấu trúc rõ ràng và đúng ngữ pháp. Tránh lỗi như 'in is very easily' và 'finish the task more easy'. Hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể hơn.

Example: Yes, I usually make a plan and schedule for my work because it helps me organize my tasks better. As a result, I can finish my work more efficiently.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp nghiêm trọng. Bạn nên tránh lặp từ và sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng. Ngoài ra, hãy giải thích lý do cụ thể hơn và tránh những từ không rõ nghĩa như 'They have a mic'.

Example: In my opinion, some people don't like making lists because they find planning difficult and may not stick to their plans strictly.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp như 'armor easy', 'check appeared'. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và đúng ngữ pháp. Hãy giải thích lý do cụ thể và sử dụng từ vựng chính xác.

Example: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's more convenient. I can easily add or check items and carry it with me anywhere.

× I usually make a list when I shopped on so that very easily for me to check an remember things.

✓ I usually make a list when I shop so that it is very easy for me to check and remember things.

The verb 'shopped' is in the past tense, but the sentence describes a habitual action, so the present tense 'shop' should be used. Also, 'on' is unnecessary and 'an' should be 'and'. 'Very easily' should be 'very easy' to correctly modify the adjective.

× I usually make a list when I shopped on so that very easily for me to check an remember things.

✓ I usually make a list when I shop so that it is very easy for me to check and remember things.

The preposition 'on' is incorrectly used after 'shopped'. It should be removed to make the sentence grammatically correct.

× I usually make a plan and a schedule for my work in is very easily for me to do like the list that I want and it's helped me too. Finish the task more easy.

✓ I usually make a plan and a schedule for my work. It is very easy for me to do, like the list that I want, and it has helped me to finish tasks more easily.

The pronoun 'in' is incorrect and should be 'it'. Also, 'it's helped me too' should be 'it has helped me to'. The phrase 'more easy' should be 'more easily' as an adverb modifying 'finish'. The sentence structure is fragmented and needs to be split for clarity.

× In my opinion, I think I don't like making lists because say they're not good at planning something and they're not strict enough to follow the plan. They have a mic.

✓ In my opinion, some people don't like making lists because they are not good at planning and they are not strict enough to follow the plan. They have a weak memory.

The pronoun 'I' is incorrectly used when referring to others; it should be 'some people'. The phrase 'say they're' is unclear and should be 'they are'. 'They have a mic' is unclear and likely a mishearing of 'weak memory'.

× I prefer to make less on a paper because it's armor easy to like. Add check appeared and check on the list in more when I can easily took it to everywhere in every time in it.

✓ I prefer to make lists on paper because it's more easy to add, check, and mark items on the list, and I can easily take it everywhere at any time.

The preposition 'on' is correct with 'make lists on paper'. 'Armor' is a typo for 'more'. 'Like' should be 'like to'. 'Add check appeared and check on the list in more' is unclear and corrected to 'add, check, and mark items on the list'. 'Took' should be 'take'. 'To everywhere in every time in it' is incorrect and corrected to 'everywhere at any time'.