List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your response more natural and concise by directly answering the question and avoiding filler words like 'Umso'. Also, correct grammar mistakes such as 'an' to 'and' and improve sentence structure for clarity.

Example: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I have a good memory and can remember the groceries and items I need.

Suggestion: Your answer lacks clarity and contains grammatical errors. Try to form complete sentences and provide more specific details about your work and how making lists helps you. Avoid unnecessary filler words and repetitions.

Example: Yes, I definitely make lists for my work because I work at an agency where I have many tasks to manage. Making lists helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget important duties.

Suggestion: Your answer is clear and relevant but could be improved by adding linking words to enhance coherence and by providing a more varied vocabulary. Also, try to include a personal opinion or example to enrich your response.

Example: Some people don't like making lists because they find them unnecessary in their daily lives. For instance, those with simple or routine jobs might prefer to focus directly on their tasks instead of planning. I think that while working hard is important, making lists can help improve efficiency.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to express your preference clearly and provide a reason using correct grammar and vocabulary. Avoid filler phrases like 'you know' and incomplete sentences.

Example: I prefer to make lists on paper rather than on my phone because my phone has many games that distract me, so I might forget what I need to write down.

× Actually no, I don't use a list because I have a good memory an I can recall all the things like groceries and items I need.

✓ Actually no, I don't use a list because I have a good memory and I can recall all the things like groceries and items I need.

The word 'an' is a typo and should be 'and' to correctly connect the two clauses. Using the correct conjunction 'and' ensures the sentence is grammatically correct and clear.

× Umso. I haven't used before, at least when I went to shop.

✓ I haven't used one before, at least when I went shopping.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Umso' is not appropriate here. Also, 'used' needs an object ('one' referring to a list), and 'went to shop' should be 'went shopping' to use the correct verb form.

× I working at the agents in company.

✓ I work at an agency in a company.

The verb 'working' is missing the auxiliary verb 'am' if present continuous is intended, but here simple present 'I work' is more appropriate. Also, 'agents' should be 'agency' to correctly refer to the workplace, and 'in company' needs an article 'a' to be grammatically correct.

× There. I mean there are many things to write down. Anne.

✓ There are many things to write down.

The original contains unnecessary fragments and an unclear word 'Anne'. Removing these makes the sentence clear and grammatically correct.

× I would say that I like to make a list on paper rather than my phone because my phone at have a lot of games you know and make me forgets what I should write on.

✓ I would say that I like to make a list on paper rather than on my phone because my phone has a lot of games, you know, and makes me forget what I should write.

The phrase 'my phone at have' is incorrect; it should be 'my phone has'. Also, 'make me forgets' should be 'makes me forget' to agree with the singular subject 'phone'. The preposition 'on' is needed before 'my phone' to indicate location. These corrections improve subject-verb agreement and preposition use.