List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but contains some grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to make your sentences clearer and more concise, for example, avoid repeating 'from the shop' and 'to the shop'. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Example: Yes, I usually make a list before shopping because it helps me plan what to buy and save money. I write the list either on a piece of paper or in the notepad app on my phone.

Suggestion: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence, then add specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases like 'kind so special jobs' and 'use it it'.

Example: I usually make a list for work when I have special tasks to complete. Writing a plan on paper helps me save time and organise my jobs effectively.

Suggestion: Your answer has good ideas but some sentences are grammatically incorrect and incomplete. Try to use linking words to connect your points and complete your thoughts clearly. Also, avoid vague phrases like 'they we need to spend some time'.

Example: I think some people don't like making lists because they have good memories and can organise their schedules mentally. Also, making lists takes extra time that they might prefer to avoid.

Suggestion: Your answer is incomplete and a bit confusing. Try to complete your sentences and use linking words to explain your preference clearly. Avoid unfinished thoughts like 'I on the other hand'.

Example: It depends on the situation. For instance, at work I prefer writing lists on paper because I can't use my phone. However, when I'm shopping or out, I usually use my phone to make lists.

× Yes, I usually make a list before I go to the shop becauses it would help me to plan ahead to what to buy from the shop and help me to save the money.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list before I go to the shop because it helps me to plan ahead what to buy from the shop and helps me to save money.

The word 'becauses' is a misspelling of 'because'. Also, 'would help' should be 'helps' to match the present tense context. The phrase 'help me to save the money' should be 'helps me to save money' for natural usage and to avoid unnecessary article 'the'. The conjunction 'and' connects two verbs that should both be in the present tense to maintain consistency.

× I always write the list on a piece of paper or on the notepad in my phone.

✓ I always write the list on a piece of paper or in the notepad on my phone.

The preposition 'in' is used with 'notepad' as it is an app or a file inside the phone, while 'on' is used with 'phone' as a device. The original sentence incorrectly uses 'on' before 'the notepad' and 'in' before 'my phone', which is reversed.

× Usually it depends on if I have to do some kind so special jobs.

✓ Usually it depends on if I have to do some kind of special jobs.

The phrase 'some kind so special jobs' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'some kind of special jobs'. 'Kind of' is the correct collocation to describe a type or category.

× I will write that plan on a list of paper that would help me to save my time and organize the jobs I wanted to use it it.

✓ I will write that plan on a list of paper that would help me save my time and organize the jobs I want to do.

The phrase 'I wanted to use it it' is unclear and incorrect. It should be 'I want to do' to express intention. Also, 'save my time' is more natural than 'save my time and organize the jobs'. The preposition 'on' is correct with 'a list of paper' but the sentence structure is awkward and needs simplification.

× If some of the people doesn't need a list because they have got a very good memory, they can organize everything according to their schedules in their minds.

✓ If some people don't need a list because they have a very good memory, they can organize everything according to their schedules in their minds.

'Some of the people' is better as 'some people' for naturalness. 'Doesn't' should be 'don't' to agree with plural subject 'some people'. 'Have got' can be simplified to 'have'.

× Additionally, they we need to spend some time.

✓ Additionally, they need to spend some time.

The phrase 'they we need' is incorrect and redundant. It should be 'they need' to form a correct sentence.

× I on the other hand, if I'm at the shop or I'm going for any other places that I need to organize them.

✓ On the other hand, if I'm at the shop or going to any other places, I need to organize them.

The phrase 'I on the other hand' is incorrectly ordered. 'On the other hand' should start the sentence. Also, 'going for any other places' should be 'going to any other places'. The sentence was incomplete and needed restructuring for clarity.